Reviews for In the Keeping of HFA
SunsetSongwind chapter 11 . 5/25/2021
Hey! I wanted to say that there aren't any quotation marks until chapter 15.
Also, there are a lot of sentences that come from nowhere, such as 'started Ally. Heard the joke about Professor Umbridge and the werewolf?' Please fix that!
Other than those errors, I enjoyed the first story and am enjoying this.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
Good story, but it's missing the all-important quotation marks, and some words to boot!
alynawatlovers chapter 21 . 9/23/2014
Hi. I was just reading when it suddenly stopped. Boo! Out of curiosity, while I was reading, I realized that there were words missing, and that quotation marks were missing in spades. However, it was very interesting.
Phoenix Flight chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Dear Meir Brin,

I had to think of you when I encountered a truly epic Mini-Aragog in the story Oma's Choice. I'm sharing it with you now in the hope that it will make you laugh as well. Here goes:

"[Harry] Finding out that he was a parcel tong, and learning how quickly the school would turn against him."

Phoenix Flight
ASQQERYOPT chapter 4 . 10/5/2012
Ummm...There are bits missing. "Started Ally" What did Ally start? And there are no quotation marks D: But so far, it has me intrigued.
KiraReySolo chapter 21 . 4/29/2012
This story needs to be updated, and soon hopefully soon. It is extremely amazing, and I love it.
Sgt. Sporky chapter 21 . 12/20/2011
Hello again, Miss Brin. I told you I'd see this, didn't I, milady?

Fender is an interesting character, so full of fake angst and contempt for everything. Sort of reminds me of myself a little. Except I was all contempt and very little angst. Don't like angst. Not unless it's really well-done angst. Or parody angst. The other one is also interesting. What was her name? Phyra, or something?

I also wonder about this Wrenchman fellow, and his boss whose name escapes me. What prescisely are they attempting? More importantly, how will it effect everything?

Aye, it seems everything's going right to hell, doesn't it?

But when did Canon Shift from OotP to HBP? You don't seem to have written the Shift. And then there was the HBP-DH shift. That was nuts. Then again, they're all nuts.

I remember when I read DH. I was so excited when I started. And so sad when it ended. Then, I watched the final movie this summer, and I was... Empty. There is no other word for what happens when a saga like HP ends. Emptiness. I know the PPC don't approve of the Inheritance Cycle, but I read "Inheritance", its final book, a few weeks back. That coming to an end, too, created emptiness. Brian Jacques, creator of the Redwall world, died this February. He, too, left a hole. Just remember that the fandom never dies as long as we continue to read and write. As the Sandlot film said, "heroes are remembered, but legends never die." And who knows, maybe, some years from now, Rowling or perhaps her family will write more books, concerning the children of our dear friends. Until then, we'll have to fill that particular role, I suppose.

Well, here's to everything, Brin. *raises glass, downs the whole thing in one go*

Update soon!
Crimson Doom chapter 21 . 11/8/2011
You are brilliant! Just thought that needed saying.

Now, to be specific:

1. Fender. We get to see a different kind of badfic writer, and I approve.

2. Mysterious plot that nonetheless...

3. ...does not take away in any way from the inherent humor of this place.

4. Well-written. Self-explanatory.

So yeah, I hope you come back to this, because I just came back to it myself, and I'd like to know what happens.
Zarohk Korobase chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
I don't know yet, but I believe that the mysterious object is the Writer's Bloak or a differently named variant of it. Great story so far.
Hanhula chapter 21 . 10/13/2011
Wow, this is amazingly good. Hope you update soon - you've been writing it for 7 years! Yet it's been over a year since you last updated...
L.A.H.H chapter 21 . 9/21/2011
I know how unlikely it is that this will be updated, but I thought it was worth a try.
Krzysz00 chapter 4 . 3/23/2011
Why is Chapter 6 missing all the quotation marks?
Krzysz00 chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Typo correction:

"appeared from no where" - "appeared from nowhere"
Anonymous chapter 5 . 10/2/2010
I'm sorry. I tried, but I really, really can't read this. I'm not exaggerating. It wasn't the plot that was bad. From what I could decipher, it was rather good. But it's impossible to read without quotation marks. I could not believe what the difference they made. I now fully appreciate the difference a quotation mark makes.
Walrus Puncher chapter 6 . 7/24/2010
Ah, I hate bringing this to your attention, but it seems that has deleted every single quotation mark from the story, as of 7/24/10
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