Reviews for The Taming Of Harry Potter
hp4all chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Are you incubating a new You-Know-Who? Anyway, it's an original start. I believe Harry's gone insane. It must happen to everyone trapped in a dark 5x5 box for 4 years. Unless that someone is having an enormous self-control and strength of mind.

It's good that they've sent cold-blooded Severus to retrieve Potter. Hagrid would've broken a couple of necks in the Darsley household.
Jay chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
it's great! i hope you keep up the good work and update soon!
Alena chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Wow. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story. And I'm glad you applied such reasoning about the age and linguistics, it makes things more believable (well, besides the whole magic thing :) ) Look forward to the next chapter!
rene chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
this is a really interesting story idea, i look forward to reading more. please write again soon!
shitsumon chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Yes, I think your use of linguistic psychology is quite appropriate for this fic. As things stand, Harry will have problems anyway.
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
rosy chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Oh! evil!

you're so evil with little Harry!

and, oddly, I like that!

continue!
purplefirepheonixx chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
i like this story so far. i totaly agree that u had to change the age, as a psychology student my self i would've been wondering about that if u hadn't. anyways i hope u keep udating this story.
Minerva-Severus-Dumbledor chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
I like what you have going so far. You could still turn it to slash, have HP/SS relationship start off as a protector of Harry then over the next few years have them get closer, and then by 7th year have them try and begin a lover's relationship. You don't hav to do it at age 11. Just a thought on since this way there is no way for Sev to feel that Harry lives in the lap of luxury at home since he is effectively rescuing Harry. I agree with you on the rehabilitation portion if it had been from the beginning he wouldn't have much chance of rehab.

Keep up the good work and looking forward to more even if it is a disturbing story.

~~Minnie
spacecatdet chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Good Beginning.

However I do see one BIG problem. Arabella Figg was watching over Harry for Dumbledore ever since he was placed at the Dursleys. She would have KNOWN, there were NO OTHER relatives he could be sent to and informed Dumbledore of it.

If Dumbledore never bothered to check on Harry after she reported he was no longer being seen at the Dursley's when the wards would have indicated he was still there, then Dumbledore deserves to be sent to Azkaban because he is just as guilty for what Vernon did to Harry as Vernon Dursley.
spacecatdet chapter 2 . 9/10/2003
Good Story, but I found only one major problem with it. Arabella Figg

She had been taking care of Harry since he was old enough to be foisted off on her by the Dursley's. She would have known he had no other relatives and repoirted the fact he was no longer being seen to Dumbledore and what the Dursley's were saying about his disappearance.

And if Dumbledore, knowing that the wards indicated Harry was still there, never bothered to check it out then that makes him FAR WORSE than Voldemort ever would be because he would have left a child in Hell and would deserve to go to Azkaban for it right along with the Dursley's
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