|Reviews for Artemis Fowl: The Ruby Conspiracy|
| Emma chapter 8 . 6/25/2005
please could you finish it, because it is very very(recurring) good!
| anon chapter 8 . 6/25/2005
That is very good, the characterisation is fine.
Are you going to write the rest? (please do)
I don't think Colfer will ever write a romance bewteen Holly and Artemis, there haven't been any hints except for good friendhsip at the end of Opal Deception but it is always fun to dream. :P
Some of the parts with speech became confusing to read, which was the idea but I personally feel it may have made it slightly too slow.
Please excuse my spelling I am ill and not thinking straight.
| Kaye the Fowl Fan chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
This is the best fan fiction I have read so far! I absolutley love the concept of Artemis at a dance! I myself have experimented with it!
| ShadowMagick chapter 8 . 6/11/2005
They totally have to get back together! It totally sucks that Holly's being all bitchy and pretending not to love...er "like" him anymore...she didn't hear that... anyway, keep writing!
| Natasha chapter 8 . 6/3/2005
Great "romance" between Arty and Holly (No more of that , Arty's MINE * angry eyes*)But please *smiles sweetly*update
| Natasha chapter 8 . 6/2/2005
Very original. I like it. Update please
| Drizzt chapter 4 . 5/24/2005
Hi. I really love this story. Quick, funny, and not nearly as much OOC as many other fan fics tend to be. I only have one negative/humorous remark: In chap 4, you gave Holly an Adams Apple. I sincerly hope that she hasn't got one, otherwise our little Artemis is heading for an ugly surprise ;)
Anyway, keepup te good work.
| shadowcat15 chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Some of this is slightly confusing, but that's really the only complaint I have. I think you're doing fine with the characterzations.
| aperfectattitude chapter 8 . 5/1/2005
This is an excellent story and one of the best I've ever read. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens. I hope Artemis and Holly get back together (if they could ever have been considered together), as I am a fan of that pairing, and you managed to get it to work perfectly earlier. Anyway please update soon.
| Eva Evans chapter 8 . 4/16/2005
Please Update! I liked it, but i hate Katie! Seriously, i think you should kill her off or something! Anyway, i will keep up with this anyway, that is if you update!
| olivia stevens chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
OMG! This is so good! You are a genius! And only after the firtst chappie, lol...
I have to finish up my homework, but be sure that I will be back!
PS: Originality... That's a new concept... :)
I'm lovin' it!
| BeatlesLover chapter 8 . 4/10/2005
WOW! this is a hell of a good fic, man. i'd just wish you'd update soon...
there were a couple things i found quite amusing:
1. Juliet's "wrestling code"
2. "Calfy" instead of Foaly
...and other things i'm too lazy to type about.
anyway, keep up the good work! please update soon!
| nnnnnnnnnnnn chapter 8 . 4/9/2005
you so maded it an arty holly fixs but than changed t...you should get the plot going more...and updae very soon...
| TheBlackCoyote chapter 3 . 4/8/2005
| Secca Irises chapter 8 . 4/8/2005
Actually, "The Opal Deception" is out right now. I bought it, but am not going to reas it until tomorrow; I am going on vactaion over Spring Break. Anyway, it looks very good, and I can't wait to read it.
On the topic of you fanfic, I really like it. Just as a note, the mushy stuff a few chapters back was a little OOC for Artemis, although Holly's actions make sense now that the effects of the potion Holly took have been explained. Not that I dislike fluff - To the contrary! I like all the mushy fluff I can get! I just want it to stay belivable. Just tone it down a tiny bit for Artemis in the future, k?
Other than that, your writing is absolutly wonderfull. You are doing a very good job, writing in Eion Colfer's voice, and the plot is quite belivable and realistic. Please, continue writing!
I also like Harry Potter, and I believe you mentiond that you enjoy that realm of fanfiction also. If you ever run out of ideas, may I suggest you write some in that area? I would most deffinatly enjoy finding out if you can write Draco Malfoy as easily you do Artemis...
I will review when you update again! Just make sure you update, so that can happen!