Reviews for Delusion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lololololololol so totally sexy love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it ended a little quickly, but i needed a fluffy story and this was a good read! |
![]() ![]() Oooooomg this was the funniest fanfic I've ever read! :'D I just loooove Ron SOOO much in this! He's so cute! "Harry, are you on drugs?" OH GOD! :'D And "Potter, I'm not a bizard" was the best line ever. EVER. OH SHIT THIS WAS HILARIOUS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pansy isn't smart, she's clever. (I think there's a difference) |
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![]() ![]() Wimptard, slitch, LOL, then LMFAO and finally ROFL. |
![]() ![]() Harry is soooooo out of character. its ron that usually has the temper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() l0l0l Ron loves Pig. Cuuute (: Nice first chap, its funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. Lol sorry, there i go again. I have a stupide grin plastered to my face and it won't come off now. Darn you and your wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() At this point, i just end the chapters by saying. "Oh my gosh..." with a stupid grin on my face. Absolutely mind-blowing! I almost wet MY OWN pants when i read the part with Justin and Ron, Hermione and Draco. Fantastic job, and can't wait to see what happens next as i continue to read! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL draco is so freaking cocky in this chapter xD |
![]() ![]() omg i was laughing so hard at the end when ron said slitch god it hurt o and btw awesome story |
![]() ![]() aw! I LOVE ronald. and your made up words. awesome job. |
![]() ![]() This chapter is hilarious. I love the part about crabbe (even if that was in the last one) and pansy being all bitchy and especially the harry drug scandal. Absolutely priceless. This story is so much better than I was expecting it to be. great job! |
![]() ![]() hey! great story. all the characters (malfoy especially) are really in character. I really am glad that you decided to finish this even though you seemed to have had some troubles. i never would've guessed just by reading the story. One thing though, its "corsage" as in those flower things people wear to dances as opposed to "corset" as in those whalebone devices women used to make their waists narrower. |