Reviews for Keitaro I'm Pregnant
lets-inspire chapter 5 . 3/13/2015
Wow. Love the story, love Shinobu! Besides the horrible grammar mistakes and accidental spelling mistakes, with the slightly confusing constant changing points of view, this is one of my favorites.
Matt Bigham chapter 20 . 4/8/2013
Dear Writer I absolutely loved this story when I read it and I know you would only write another story about Keitaro and Shinobu and there son Kappei if you get enough reviews asking for one but I'm interested in reading about Keitaro and Shinobu's wedding with there son Kappei included as we. So please make another story about the three of them.

Matthew Wayne Bigham
Golden Silver Kelina chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Dear lord i feel sorry for him cuz man did it get ugly now this is well theres just plain crazy
The Marshmallow Man chapter 20 . 11/9/2011
well this was one of the best stories i have ever read, granted there were the grammer and spelling errors, but i dont mind that. what i really care about is the amazing outcome that came out of Kei winning a trip for two to San Fransisco.

loved the story so much, hope you continue to write stories(especially Love Hina ones starring Shinobu)!
The Marshmallow Man chapter 19 . 11/9/2011
so they had a boy... amazing

little Kappei

i hope he enjoys his life with Kei and Shinobu
The Marshmallow Man chapter 18 . 11/8/2011
Shinobu sounds like she is too much pain, i feel so sorry for Kei

lovin the story
The Marshmallow Man chapter 17 . 11/8/2011
another great chapter, love the way you added more aspects to the story by giving Kei an older brother and making him a watcher none the less,not to mention how he explains all the events leading up to the current time in the story

loved this chapter!
The Marshmallow Man chapter 16 . 11/8/2011
what... the... hell... just... happened?

i dont know what to say, i'm still trying to figure out what just happened...

good job at this awesomeness!
The Marshmallow Man chapter 15 . 11/8/2011
Well Shinobu knew best, like always

Luckily she convinced Kei to go to the hospital so he wouldnt get hurt,

the story is great so far
The Marshmallow Man chapter 14 . 11/8/2011
broke... the... sword...?

holy hell!

didnt see that one coming!

well at least Raymond got to talk to Fong Ling

i really didnt think Kei would reveal the secret like that though
The Marshmallow Man chapter 13 . 11/7/2011

Kei is so thoughtful

love the way even on a beutiful night like that you still added so many funny things like Mark saying Raymond looked like a penguin
The Marshmallow Man chapter 12 . 11/7/2011
this story is really starting to develop now, everyone knows each other, Kei is a Titan, and Kei's and Shinobu's relationship is really starting to develop!

great work so far
The Marshmallow Man chapter 11 . 11/7/2011
so now they all akiko and them know

and so do the Titans...

well this story is just getting better and better!

i'm lovin this so much!
The Marshmallow Man chapter 10 . 11/7/2011
Great chapter, love the way Kei will do anything to keep his relationship with Shinobu going on secretly until he knows its time to reveal it!

loving the story!

keep up the good work!
The Marshmallow Man chapter 9 . 11/6/2011
Amazing work, as usual, you are such an amazing writer!

cant wait to finish reading this tomarrow!
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