| Reviews for Goodbye, Hello |
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   A very sad soul chapter 19 . 6/4/2016 That was fricking awesome even though I absolutely do not like Darcy at all, it was an amazing story and truly entertaining. Nice job! |
| gbiygiuygi chapter 2 . 5/14/2015 The site is adifferentforest - I'm new at this :) |
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| MJ chapter 19 . 4/1/2015 Your story was very well written and kept me entertained till the end. I was kind of sad to see Susanna end up with Ryan. He seems like a very weak person who did not fight for his love. He willingly sacrificed everyone's happiness when he had many opportunities to fix the situation. Would have loved to see Susanna find someone more worthy of her. Ryan would get what he deserves by being in a fake marriage and having a unfaithful wife. That is what you get if you do not value love. |
| lover in the shadow chapter 19 . 7/12/2013 The story was amazing! But in a way I was kind of hoping for darcy and ryan be together! |
| Ezekeel chapter 19 . 7/6/2013 wonderful! |
| f1reb1rd chapter 19 . 1/28/2013 This was a nice twist on Cinderella, very fun to read! My favorite part was probably the poem by Susanna' s cousin :D . Great work! |
| alliebug chapter 19 . 9/17/2011 awesome story yeah |
| Aly8188 chapter 19 . 7/21/2011 thank god they ended up 2gether |
| MirandaOBrien chapter 19 . 3/31/2011 Awww! I loved it! |
| MissRainingAngels chapter 19 . 2/20/2011 I loved your story. I think it should totally be published. It was that good! |
| 11Renee11 chapter 19 . 1/23/2011 Awww, I just love happy endings:) This was such a wonderful story! Your characters all seemed so very real...Susanna is a riot:) And Ryan! They are so perfect for each other:D You did so well with this, and I know you finished this story, like, six or seven years ago and have probably forgotten all about it by now...but I just thought you should know that it was really good:D So, yay for you:) |
| justawriter33 chapter 19 . 11/12/2010 what a lovely cinderella story |
| justawriter33 chapter 11 . 11/12/2010 This is a beautiful story with an irresistible plot with mesmerizing details. I just simply love the way you write. |
| Slytheringal39 chapter 19 . 6/1/2010 well, i WAS supposed to be studying for finals, but your story was sooo AMAZING that i couldn't stop reading it (: i just loved every single bit of it... the real and down-to-earth characters, the scrambled plot, and everything! i also loved how you actually wrote a story that told everyone how Ryan and Susanna fell in love- it wasn't just "her foot fit into the slipper and they lived happily ever after" (: BRILLIANT! P.S. I cried when Susanna said "Has everyone fallen in love except for me?" |