Reviews for Second Chance
Guest chapter 4 . 23h
I'm really confused as to where this story actually takes place. America or Japan? Its like you didn't even TRY to place the story. I'm pretty sure they don't have places like PetSmart in Tokyo, you could of at least tried to make an effort into at least clearing up the location. Not only that, you're using American names WITH Japanese names, I don't understand that? Also, the intervals between the paragraphs are really rushed. One minute Kagome is starting her day and then not even a few paragraphs down, she's finally ending it. The idea is great, but the execution of it, well, isn't.
chicaalterego chapter 1 . 7/19
Awesome! Inu version of beauty and the beast!... Why did it take me so long to stumble upon it?
Undertheskys chapter 40 . 2/12
Good story but ending was lil disappointing
Undertheskys chapter 40 . 2/12
Yay he's back
Undertheskys chapter 38 . 2/12
Ohh no Sesshomaru dint die man
Undertheskys chapter 35 . 2/12
YAAAAAAY! Shippo is going to be with Kagome now
Undertheskys chapter 24 . 2/12
The officers are probably like "Yo this dog is hella smart"
Undertheskys chapter 23 . 2/12
Wondet when Kagome is gonna find out
Undertheskys chapter 22 . 2/12
Yay he came
Undertheskys chapter 21 . 2/12
Aww poor Sesshomaru, he got dyed pink and shaved.
Undertheskys chapter 18 . 2/11
Awwwweee Kagome is definitely like a mother to Shippo. He's so adorable
Undertheskys chapter 18 . 2/11
So when you say Shippo is going to come full swing into the story does thst mean Kagome's gonna have something to do with that?... zlike adopt him...I wish that would come true
Undertheskys chapter 17 . 2/11
Ooooo they kissed! Finally
Undertheskys chapter 17 . 2/11
He pulled a Houdini hahhahaha
Undertheskys chapter 16 . 2/11
Noooo, poor Terrance
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