Reviews for Stop Beating My Heart
DEDESTRUCTOR chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
its pretty good i dont really expect better ones on christmas eve. adding stroy to good stry list
Inuyasha Obsession chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
That was really good! I liked it a lot! 10 out of 10!
Evafan2k8 chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
preety good I like how you didnt leave a cliff hanger ona one shot
Danny-171984 chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
SWEET! That was one smooth, brilliant story. I really like it, except for the rei thing. I'm a Shinji/Asuka fan. But im not complaining. It was really good. _ Keep on writing.
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Jennifer chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Aw this story is like totally sweet!
Priest chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
that was sweet, sad but sweet. keep up the good work Ja-ne (_)
Matrix chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
It's pretty good. Keep at it
Ayel-Kun chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Aw... short but romantic...
magnilan chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Very Good! Its a very heartwarming fan fic especially the christmas atmosphere which enchances the effect. Keep up the good work! -
Marcos Edson chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Short and sweet, I liked it.
Yue's Lady chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
it was nice while the r/s was on...then asuka had to come in...(groans and buries face in hands)...sorry...i just...don't really like or admire asuka (that is a big understatement). but it was sweet even when it became a/s.

but how did rei react when (or if) she found out? how could shinji forget rei's gift so quickly? oh was a good one-shot anyway! _...ja~

ps. do you think you could check out my eva fic? just click my pen name and scroll down...
Phoenix in Flames chapter 1 . 9/16/2003

as you have said yourself, it IS terribly OOC.

Rei and Shinji are totally OOC, sadly.

Asuka is not that OOC though...

Your writing is very good though. Keep it up!
TensaiMan chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Only problem I have here is OOCness, especially Rei. Shinji would never call his father 'Gendo', Rei would never call Misato as 'Misato-san'. And as I know, Asuka does not know that Rei is a clone.

The encounter between Asuka and Shinji was too short and plausible. Try to make them argue more or scream at each other for a more exciting scene.
dayon chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Outstanding work. You done a great job at your first attempt. Continue to write other stories which relate to A/S. I love these fics.
AsUkA-aNd-ShiNji-4EVAngelion chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Aw that was so kawaii!Yokodekimashita yo. _
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