|Reviews for For the Love of a Child|
| Laurena Garret chapter 15 . 5/10
I read this for the first time many years ago and loved it then. Re-read it again and I'm still in love. Great work! Love the writing!
| EvaF chapter 15 . 5/3
I know you probably won't read the review but I have to say that this story is so beautiful that I reread it at least three time within two days along with the sequel.
It is so touchy. The way you arranged the emotional peak is unbelievable. I just want to cry when I read through ch.10 to the end. The flow feels so nature and comfortable.
And I really appreciate you choosing Piccolo as the one who persisting on opening up Gohan's shielded heart. The mirror images of Piccolo/Gohan and Gohan/Goten is brilliant.
This is a special story. Thank you for writing it down.
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/12
i really liked this story and then you make gohan a fking cry baby: "daddy please i am sorry", pfff this ruined it for me
| maxridelover chapter 15 . 12/28/2014
aww this was nice!
| maxridelover chapter 14 . 12/28/2014
this was nice!
| maxridelover chapter 10 . 12/28/2014
poor gohan! it had to happen soon!
| maxridelover chapter 6 . 12/28/2014
hopefully piccolo can help him!
| berry5tz chapter 15 . 10/28/2014
Thank you for writing"For The Love Of A Child".
This was truly beautiful and wonderful story. I really loved Gohan in this one .his struggle, his sadness,his pain. It was just beautifully done. Goten, was also a adorable child. He was Gohan's life-line. He truly couldn't have survived without the little guy. Then Piccolo came and helped in a way he couldn't have seen but desperately needed.
I felt bad for Goku. He truly messed up. And ChiChi did worse by not staying for her two instead abandoned them. To make matters worse she didn't even tell Goku about having given Goku a new son. Why didn't she tell him? All I know was that it was selfishard whatever the reason. Had she shown up with Goku. I think poor Gohan would have destroyed his own house trying to get at her as well. It wasn't like he was happy with her either.
Excellent story. Know this one has been faved.
| Hipstergecko chapter 15 . 10/9/2014
This is one of the best after cell stories that I have read yet. I love how you wrote Gohan in this and I really wish that you had more time to continue writing. I want to read more about Gohan's new life and adjustments. The lovely moments with Goten made me laugh, the harsh moments with Gohan made me cry, and I am left with a feeling of satisfaction!
Thank you for taking the time to write this! Keep up the good work!
| BIG S chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
Dammit...its over. This story kicked ass. It was very emotional and believable. I smashed out the whole story in one day and went home and hugged my kid. Ill b checking out more of your work
| NatNicole chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
I've read this whole fic and the sequel, and since I'm not sure if I've revewed I'll do that now.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this fic, and the sequel's really good although the stuff with Trunks kinda bothers me. I think the characterazation is spot on in 'For the love of a child', and I hope you don't mind me sharing this fic with other people by putting it into my community 'Saiyan Father'.
| shadowsky16 chapter 13 . 2/2/2014
Totally beautiful story. I've never read a fanfic that made me cry this much. I love the relationship between Gohan and Goten and bringing Piccolo in really made the story awesome to me.
| Gohanfan chapter 15 . 9/23/2013
Brought me to tears! (And I'm post hs)
| Books52 chapter 15 . 8/2/2013
This was a REALLY good story
| Books52 chapter 12 . 8/2/2013
Jesus fuck goku is a dumbass