Reviews for Together
mae-E chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
this was a really cool story!
lilmouse chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I have been remiss in reviewing this story. Brief but beautifully written. :)

Your descriptions of their obvious love for one another, the expressions on their faces, the gentle caresses...


When were you going to write more of these lovely shorts? Tomorrow, you say...? ;)


Mouse :)
bk11 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Aw! Cuteness.

I would say more, but it's four in the morning. I'll be back to review something else later (after sleep) to make up for this.

AngelZ chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
You've left me speechless, but warm and fuzzy inside. :-)
jt chapter 1 . 9/21/2003

"They lay together in darkness, letting the shadows be their blanket, and letting the moon be their light" - Oh God, what else could I say...
a fan chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
There have been lots of wedding stories and first time together stories written, but I think you've captured a perfect m/l moment. Love the way you've captured Max and Logan's conversation pattern, finishing each other's sentences and repeating each other's thoughts. Great job.
PlasmicFemale chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Loved it, nice work.
Sossoca chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
That was so sweet and so cute! It brought a smile to my face, and God knows how much I needed it. Thanks.
GUEVERACALE452 chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
very very nice, nice touch, simple just nice...thanks for sharing
abregaza chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Thank you... :-)

Another wonderful ficlet from the mind of Denise...

Now all I need is some PL and the more fic... and well... more fic... and i'll be forever happy. chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
OOh, nice. See what all that Mountain Dew'll do to you!
Willa Mitty chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
You made me sniffle. Darn it! (Just kidding) Very sweet, very simple, a nice little moment. Thanks for sharing.
Kyre chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Hee! So you kind of fulfilled the request and kind of skirted around it. ;) No complaints from me, though. I enjoyed this.

Heh...I noticed that joke about his eyes too...
Kasman chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
What a beautiful, moving moment in time. Thankyou for that.