Reviews for Redemption
just jacs chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
that was amazing! Really powerful. Well done.
Vampiric Phantoms chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Wow, this was wonderful. I can seriously see this as what he really was thinking. I'm going to go read the rest of them!

Megz vVVv
Nugrey chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
The actions you chose to write about beautifully describe the depth of feelings your characters have for each other. The fact that it is a slice - a part of a larger story gives the scene even more intensity - very powerfully written. Bravo, well done!
Hunnique chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Madame,

Your story was absolutely perfect: it decribed with just the right amount of emotion the end of the movie, it's as if you put words to how this end made me feel. Thank you.
Leah Day chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
That was beautiful, will there be anymore?

Once again very , very beatiful.

:) Leah.