|Reviews for Redemption|
| just jacs chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
that was amazing! Really powerful. Well done.
| Vampiric Phantoms chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Wow, this was wonderful. I can seriously see this as what he really was thinking. I'm going to go read the rest of them!
| Nugrey chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
The actions you chose to write about beautifully describe the depth of feelings your characters have for each other. The fact that it is a slice - a part of a larger story gives the scene even more intensity - very powerfully written. Bravo, well done!
| Hunnique chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Your story was absolutely perfect: it decribed with just the right amount of emotion the end of the movie, it's as if you put words to how this end made me feel. Thank you.
| Leah Day chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
That was beautiful, will there be anymore?
Once again very , very beatiful.