|Reviews for How Not to Write Evangelion SelfInsertions|
| Loremaster chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Fething Hilarious! Just one issue, with the SI falling in love with Asuka/Rei. Rei [IMHO] does not really have a counterpart in the series [here come the rebukes from R/S Fans...] So an SI for Rei could be good...
| kjir09 chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Once again, an excellent guide to the newbie writer for dealing with self-inserts this time. Mixing hilarity with the remedies to the core complaints of the EVA community on newbie incompetence- simply genius. There should be a fanfic writing resource section on this site, with your "guides" first on the list.
| Bob the Insane chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
quite amusing. maybe next you could have shinji do a guide to living with misato or somthing,
| spriteh chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
XD thats frikkin genius... i dont know whether this one is better than the previous one, but theyre both hilarious - write more pls :)
chill out - sprite
| Greengo chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Damn & i thought i did well according to your "How not to write a fan fic" story... ... ... & that concludes why Gendo is & forever will be a bastard... thank fuck i bludgend him to death with Rei's dismembered arm quickly in my SI fan fic... MU TWA TWA TWA TWA TWA TWA TWA TWA TWA
Anyways... funny *Offers cookie or bottle of Jack*
| Pyremon Infernos chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Great job! The Gendo narration made it all the better.
I still gotta go read the first one, then. I'll go take a look at that right now.
| Daquarma chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
That was funny. Not as funny as HNTWFF but still funny. You should write more of these How To's.
Okay... here goes
| Ysengrinn chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
But Eva 03 was black!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
I laughed. out loud. at 2:14 am. Shit, you're good at this. All Hail the Bastard King! Yea! More of this, please!
| TensaiMan chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
That was damn funny, as usual _
| Itansha chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
I am not sure which is funnier, the fact that Gendo is presenting it or how NOT to write a SI. Good stuff!
BTW, inspired by your thing, I am planning to write "How Not to write a Eva/gundam Crossover". If you don't mind, then I will go with it.