Reviews for Holding Hands
mysteryman2000 chapter 4 . 5/23/2008
wow, good fic
Konoha's Kage chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
Ok, so I was so upset about that Tainted Soul wasn't finished that I calmed myself by reading your complete LH fic... I really like it! ... But I still want more of Tainted Soul.
Fat Man In A Bath Tub chapter 4 . 10/8/2006
Dude I just relized a few dayz ago during my 2 week checkin to C IF U ADD A CHAPTER TO "And Life Goes On" and i relized i never had read this be4. I just read the whole thing and it realy is a proto type to and life goes on. Its excelent!

2 Problems

- Mutsumi wasn't really acting like her character, she just didn't flow like normal.

- It was a little overly accepted the kietaro was immortal. A Little to blatent in my book.

1 Suggestions

-I REALY luved hearing part of the story from Naru's perspective and the voice in her head was gr8. I think it would be an supurb compliment to Kietaro's charcter in "And life goes on" to add this perspective back to the story.

3 Praises

- “Mighty eager to get alone with Naru, aintcha Keitaro?” Kitsune grinned.”

“You know, Kitsune,” Keitaro said tiredly. “Someday I really am going to seduce Naru and you’re going to eat those words.”


-Again Naru's aspect on the story, I realy like that.

- I noticed at the beginning even before the characters were named i could identify them through the dialogue. Excelent writing!

If only the show realy went like this it got realy prude and annoying towards the end they should've shot their writer in the head and hired u. Dude someday wen i have enough money i am gonna buy the writes to the show and remake it so the ending doesn't suck it bothers me. Hell i'll just give the writes to u and let u use ur story it kiks ass.

**If you want me to read over ur rough drafts for u plz send them to me.

Paintball-Gamer chapter 4 . 8/7/2006
This is a great story! Keep up the good work!
GeneralDragon chapter 4 . 6/1/2006
First fan fic? If this is your first your others must be amazing. Keep up the great work, and i'll keep on reading.
wdango chapter 4 . 12/21/2005
Wow, this is better than the original plot (canon). O Get a room, Keitaro!
wdango chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
-snort- at least four? you're an excellent writer and you expect FOUR!
animeboy-12 chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
deleted456 chapter 4 . 8/28/2005
That was amazing. This is one of the best FanFictions I have ever read, in my life.

Good job, and thank you for writing such an amazing story.

GroveWolf chapter 2 . 7/19/2005
right, well it's murphy's law not gunderson or whoever
Kiyoshi-Taro chapter 4 . 3/2/2005
hey that was a cool story even thoe this is a late post good job :D
shinji the good sharer chapter 4 . 2/10/2005
hahahahhahaha, write more stories.

ikari shinji
Sci-Fi Raptor chapter 4 . 1/4/2005
burn with the eternal fires from the ptsof hell! (flaming u)

hahaha, that was so sappy...

no, i really liked it, im a hopeless romantic too... cursed hormones...

anyway, u did a stellar job on this and i cant wait to get started on the sequal
Blitz329 chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
yea. needed to have this on fav stores list. sry!
lh fan chapter 4 . 8/21/2004
i liked this was diffrent but cool.
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