|Reviews for Shared Loss|
| Marisa chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
you have a gift - I had tears drenching my desk and my heart was breaking along with Xena and Gabrielle - oh how you got me with this one
| Xedra chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Good thing I had tissues close by cuz this made me cry. Heartbreaking!
| Raven Arya Amaranth chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
I agree with Tali-Sarah I didn't have tissues.I saw the sequel to X-men and I didn't like the story, though.
| Tali-Sarah chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
Yep, needed those tissues. Very touching :-)
| Phil D. Hernandez chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
You have a real talent for the vignette, here and in other stories like "The Waterfall." All the little references to Gabby's relationship with Argo fitted in well. Keep up the good work!
I noticed you have a technical problem with dialogue: a character's words are not necessarily the end of the sentence. This applies across the board to all your stories. For instance:
"Xena," she called softly.
instead of: "Xena." She called softly.
(If this were a question, which it was not, but this is another example, it would have been: "Xena?" she called softly.)
This also applies to thoughts: 'She'll help her. I know she will,' the bard assured herself.
Thanks for putting up with the pedantry.