Reviews for The Making of Jack Sparrow
PirateLassy6-9-63 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
"You'd think from your manor Ana-Marie," He drawled, and she suppressed a shudder. Damn him. "That you weren't happy to see me."

WOW! The end of this chapter caught my interest! BeautiFUL!
captainme chapter 2 . 6/11/2006
i love this story already, and ive only just started to read it! yay! you've written it so well, better then most that ive read. and i like the plot so far too. the whole concept of how Jack and Ana met is quite different to other stories ive read. The fact that Ana was a pirate before Jack, that shes actually older then him, and that basically shes given him the name thats so well known! i love it! im gonna shut up now, and read on some more!

Blue Wolf2 chapter 8 . 1/7/2005
I was re-reading my reviews, and was shocked to see I had reviewed each chapter in this story- but chapter 8! you go!

Sparrow's eyes widened with shock at having such teeth so close to his face. *lol*


"Ah, Jack, you could never hold your liquor well. Do you always go all insightful?" *snicker.- very cute*
Amber Myst chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
Hey...I love this story it's truly a work of art and that is why i would like permission to post this on a website I'm starting. It's a Jack and Anamaria fansite...I figured we needed one _. SO you can give me your answer three ways...a) you can email me at b) you can leave it as a review for one of my stories or c) you can rent a blimp, fly it all the way to New Jersey from Texas_ and then paste your answer on the side of the Blimp...i"m bound to see it. Ta!
Blue Wolf2 chapter 27 . 2/6/2004
"To the stars. One day, you and me, and we'll take Elizabeth and Will I guess, and we'll go to the stars." He said pompously. "Just have to think of a way..." He said, tapping his temple.
Julia! Agh! Why didn't you just kill her!
"Did you just throw that compass at her head?"
Ana-Maria fell on him, kissing him and laughing, her black hair forming a veil around his face.
"I love you Jack," She said in-between kisses. He grinned very characteristically, his ringed fingers pushing through her hair and stealing their way down her body. -aw
the compass to the Ile De Muerta lay still and forgotten. -nice ending touch.
Over the story was wonderful! I hope to read more of your works in the future.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 26 . 2/6/2004
"Have to return them." lol, they act like they are puppies.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 25 . 2/6/2004
He let the ship sink! Way to go Sparrow. Yes, Julia really is a bitch. It's a good reason for them betraying him.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 24 . 2/6/2004
"Oh, bloody hell, the Portella. She'll kill me if it sinks." -Nice of you to remember Jack, lol.
"Oh my god, could you be any more of a bitch?"
AGH! I can't believe he went with her! No! You have to return the ship you moron! Stupid pirate.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 23 . 2/6/2004
O, she's so evil! I say KILL HER! lol.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 22 . 2/6/2004
My reactions:
He put his hands on her hips and grinned. Possibly one of the best ways be woken up, he thought happily.. -aw
Ana-Maria was sitting on him, holding a dagger in one hand, her face with a not-happy-jan expression. *gasp*
"You bastard." She said. -lol (sorry, it was knda funny)
"My way of saying I'd come back." Jack said quietly. -aww
"Jack," She said, burying her head in his chest.
"Because. because you're more important. This," She touched his chest, and then her own. "This is more important then something that happened ten years ago." She said bluntly. -double aw
"Oh, come on, you know, you wear eyeliner, he had that thing with the apples." She said bobbing her head. -LOL
Blue Wolf2 chapter 21 . 2/6/2004
Nice idea on how he got the compass, and the Pearl's there too. So Julia lied? Interesting.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 20 . 2/5/2004
"Because luvy, I bought you a present." -haha/aw
Liked the whole 'I thought they came back for me.' Thing, very deep. A side we don't see of Jack much.
"You gunna let me finish woman?" He said. "God, I get no bloody respect." -lol
"No drunk philosophising." hehe
Blue Wolf2 chapter 19 . 2/5/2004
Ouch, Barl was a bit harsh there. This is getting interesting.
Blue Wolf2 chapter 18 . 2/5/2004
Aww, she said she loved him. Is he taking the ship now? Uh oh...she wont be happy. No sir...
Blue Wolf2 chapter 17 . 2/5/2004
Woa, Barbossa and apples...telling Tunrer how he'll die. And now Julia shows up. Very interesting.
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