Reviews for Untouchable
KnightLawn chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
Nice job on this poem.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
you are gay
Chezana chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
That would be really touching if it wasn't about Vegeta...ack!...I mean, not that i have anythin against him or nothin, but i can't think of it without thinking.
animegrrrl chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
damn, impressive! i think that was your best poem. intense, like the prince of all saiyans.
Maeko-Nohara chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Oh God. That was TOO cool. It was...too perfect and lovely for words. I can't describe this, I really can't, except that it was far too wonderful for my eyes, and that won't do it justice by a long shot. I love to read good stuff like this. Wonderful. PLEASE keep writing... I'm saving this onto my hard drive. (And it's pretty hard to make me do that...not as if you'd care, but still.)

Keep writing. You're terrific.

PS- Not that you'd know, but Vegeta is one of my favorite characters (second to ironic) and I love to read good fics/poems about him! Thank you!
Chuquita chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Aww, what a sad sweet lil poem!
Shadow's Mirror chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Whoa... that is really excellent! You've caught Vegeta perfectly!