Nice job on this poem.

you are gay

That would be really touching if it wasn't about Vegeta...ack!...I mean, not that i have anythin against him or nothin, but i can't think of it without thinking.

damn, impressive! i think that was your best poem. intense, like the prince of all saiyans.

Oh God. That was TOO cool. It was...too perfect and lovely for words. I can't describe this, I really can't, except that it was far too wonderful for my eyes, and that won't do it justice by a long shot. I love to read good stuff like this. Wonderful. PLEASE keep writing... I'm saving this onto my hard drive. (And it's pretty hard to make me do that...not as if you'd care, but still.)

Keep writing. You're terrific.

PS- Not that you'd know, but Vegeta is one of my favorite characters (second to Goku...how ironic) and I love to read good fics/poems about him! Thank you!

Aww, what a sad sweet lil poem!

Whoa... that is really excellent! You've caught Vegeta perfectly!