|Reviews for Ocean Soul|
| SweetnWild chapter 19 . 12/14/2013
Soo I found you last night when I was just looking for some smut. I found one of your other willxjack stories and was curious. I'd never considered that pairing before and I was a little apprehensive. I don't usually support real people-or even their characters as slash but it was great. Still incredibly horny I click to see what else you've got in your stash, find Ocean soul and-
I think it was chapter four that I put the iPod that I was reading it on down and just said "wow. I wish my writing was like this."
I don't think I've ever had that happen before and it was really eye opening. Your vocabulary, the way the words flowed without a single hitch- I'm only on chapter 12 as of yet but I'm in love. And I'm a bit nervous with looking into more of jack and will slashes and the other writer's not holding a candle to you. First of all- I write abuse and rape and darker stories and so my first taste of these two together involving the healing process was so great! Then their relationship was silky and tender but also had a rawness that only a victim of such horrors and a pirate could produce! Then I'm reading and- I used to have a vocabulary like the one shown in here. Then I felt like people were thinking of me strangely for how I spoke so I kinda "dumbed myself down". The vocabulary in this one, and how every word made crystal clear sense was epic! There's so many writers right now trying to improve their vocabulary but they use the words incorrectly, or at the wrong spot and it effects the flow. Yours helped the flow.
Great job, I think you're an awesome person and I'm definitely going to be reading your other pieces!
Oh! P.S the cliffhangers! I'm so glad I've found this after its completed because if I'd come in while this was being made I would be tearing my hair out, having a love-hate development with you! I pity the souls that came in early ;D
Great job babe, you were fantastic and I can't wait to see your other pieces!
| AzucenaXshadows chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
This was an interesting journey
Thank u for sharing
| Shadowfey913 chapter 18 . 5/28/2013
This story is great, thanks for sharing it!
| MidoriNine chapter 19 . 5/25/2013
Awesome read, thanks!
| silent woods chapter 18 . 10/27/2012
I. Love. You. I cant wait to read more of your stories
| melissen chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
This is very interesting. I like that it's AU rather then follow the movie. I've read too many of those.
| CurlyMustache chapter 18 . 7/30/2012
That was so amazing! I'm gonna have difficulty finding another story that I like as much as yours. :3
| CurlyMustache chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
Awh shit. I love this story, by the way, it's magnificent! :'3
| CurlyMustache chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
They are so cute eeeeeeeee. :'333
| CurlyMustache chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Abububub. So cute. Q_Q
| CurlyMustache chapter 8 . 7/30/2012
Definately my favorite chapter so far. Well done.
| CurlyMustache chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Ohoho. :P You're a great author! c:
| CurlyMustache chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Very intruiging so far! :33
| llamajo chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
On to the next chapter!
| llamajo chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This looks awesome! I can't wait to read more!