Reviews for Maruman
caitiebek chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
wow that's really good
axxe chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
oh I love this poem! You have a gift!
Girl On A Yellow Brick Road chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
This is so cute! It's nice to see another Lewis Carroll fan. If this was not inspired by the Walrus and the Carpenter I'll eat my own hat! (which is black by the way)

'The time has come,' the Walrus said,

'To talk of many things:

Of shoes - and ships - and sealing wax -

Of cabbages - and kings -

And why the sea is boiling hot -

And whether pigs have wings.'

This poem is as adorable as pink mittens! Nice work.
ButterflyMouse chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I loved this. Its both cute and witty and while there are a couple of forced rhymes, I haven't seen any that sound forced.

There was just one line which jarred with the others; He's black, or I'll eat my hat!

I think that this is both because black and hat sound very similar, but also because it has seven beats while the two lines you rhymed it with have six.

Aside from that, its a really great poem and I loved it.
Blondcullen chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I love your poem its great :)
Lady Brakefall chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Haha i love it
Rejhan chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
I remember reading this ages ago, and I still love it! Especially the last line. Made me laugh _ Awesome job Bunne! Luv Megs.
jessi chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
funny
Minnn chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
OMG How adorable is that? Cheers Katie *raises glass in toast* That was so sweet :D
Luv, Min
Eowyn chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Buneater - glad to see another Obernewtynite around! It is Eowyn of the Wanderers - and i have to say your poem was magnificent! Much congratulations and top deck chocolate to you!

Good luck forver and always,

luv Eowyn