Reviews for The Number Game
vodka straight chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Extremely well done. Great organization, great characterization. I love how you've catered to Laynie's actual character; she doesn't seem like the kind of girl to find comfort in statistics and numbers and black and white, and so the fact she is so terribly thrown by Colin's death that she resorts to it is powerful in and of itself. Nice job.
Ditey chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
This *is* very powerful. The repitition of numbers, the small stories of Colin's past, all were woven nicely together. I really enjoyed reading this. Laynie's POV is very hard to write, but I think you did this perfectly.
marianna chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
dude.

that was like, amazingly powerful.

i loved it.
MariCareBear chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
OMG! That was so so so so so sad! I am like crying here...which is kind of embaressing since I am sitting in class reading this and nearly bawling my eyes out! Keep up the excellent work!
Ira Gaines chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Very good. I love Laynie.
Everwood89 chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
really,really good! at first i wasnt gonna read it because i hate numbers then i decided to check it out and waas really glad i start,keep up the good work!