Reviews for Of Broken Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So, I was just going to review on the first and last chapters, but this cracks me up. And I had to share. I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the last line of this. Thanks for sharing!(: |
![]() ![]() aww that was fantastic your really good at writing these keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() *dies* I adore your writing style, emotional and yet funny! I'm glad that your in the J/E fandom! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really like Will's character in the movie, but I felt so bad for him in this story! I really liked this fic! I liked how you gave the characters a chapter to express their own thoughts and feelings. I especially liked chapter 7. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry I didn't find this sooner. Bloody depressing how must sand you have to sift to find a bit of gold mixed in. This was pure Au. Loved your characterizations. You even managed to make Will seem interesting to me- this is akin to leaping tall buildings, and about as common. Loved the format. Going to check out your other PotC writings now. I liked your profile- if chocolate, you'd be bittersweet, if roses- something heirloom and white I think, and headily fragrant, imho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! I love the points of view, and especially the ending. Poor Will, his heart broken but Jack and Elizabeth get to be together. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was adorable. I loved the last chapter most of all. Wonderful job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Sigh* Happiness... :)~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. I loved it. Hope you write another one soon! |
![]() ![]() Aw...That was so...Sweet... Naturally Little Will would want to hear that story...I bet Jack loves telling all of them... I absolutely adore this story and am going to be heartbroken that it's over...But I can still reread it now can't I...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! love the Norrington bits! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the update! The beginning of the 12th chapter from Elizabeth's point of the view, the characterization was perfect. Also, it takes a very special kind of writer to make me feel any pity at all for Will, not because I hate him, because I don't, but because I'm so JE. But, you did it! Don't leave us hangin' too long! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sighs happily* MUCH better than homework. |
![]() ![]() More more more! So sad/sweet! I GOTTA know what happens! Quick! Update! xoxo ~ Aire |