|Reviews for My Little Pony: The Great War|
| shadowfan999 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
please update this fic with a new chapter i cant wait to read what happens next
| mitchell chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
update soon please
| mitchell chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
this is a really good story update soon please
| mitchell chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
i really like this story update soon please
| mitchell chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
i really like the idea of this story update soon
| Colorado Kid chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Your writing has potential, now all you need is some souping up...find a way to study the entire storyline of the LOTR movies...rewrite this and find a way to squish it in between the three movies if you can. Or maybe make the enemy mysterious until near the end Who is the enemy? Who will it be?
Or maybe make it that Sauron, when destroyed, cells, by his own sheer will, reformed somehow, and he ressurrected to take over all that is pure in the world (by some sort of interdimensional cross-rift that sent him into the future world where The Valley of the Ponies is)...and he wants to dominate the new world...perhaps that interdimensional cross-rift invites all the other characters (Legolas, Gimli, etc.) into the modern world somehow...
There are always possibilities. Focus on canon, fictional events that happened. Go for it!
| Princess SimbiAni Dreamz a'Luv chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
Luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!
| aggiemuggle chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
In response to the "Author's Notes" -
First, I believe you mean "synopsis" (n : a sketchy summary of the main points of an argument or theory [syn: outline, abstract, precis]), as a synapse involves neurons, and "synapes" is not a word.
Secondly, I believe you mean "legion" (n 1: archaic terms for army [syn: host]), as "leagon" is not a word.
Thirdly, the Lonely Mountain does not have an army.
Fourthy, Sauron was utterly destroyed and Mordor defeated in the War of the Ring. It is highly unlikely that he would manage to attack Ponyland only three years after having lost the source of his power.
Fifthly, since the armies of Middle Earth took so long to band together when they themselves were threatened, it is illogical that they come to the aid of the Ponies so rapidly.
Finally, this "chapter" has a grand total of 250 words, including author's notes and coding. This is not long enough to count as a even prologue. Please, develop your chapters more before posting them, and kindly take the time to spell check next time.
| Fenolen chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Cool. That sound like such a good idea. i can't wait to read more of it. Lotr are my fave books and films and i use to love MLP when i was little. my faves together! cool