Reviews for Inner Demons VERSION 1
ShadowLDrago chapter 21 . 2/7/2013
I KNEW IT! I absolutely knew trhat Impmon's champion form was Devimon, he is one of the most awesome evil cahmpions ever! and I wonder what is his Ultimate form NeoDevimon or Myotismon or something else either way his Mega Form IS Beelzemon and he is awesome!
ShadowLDrago chapter 14 . 2/4/2013
So, Takato's the Shadow Tamer, Alice is the Death Tamer, Rika's the Seeing Tamer and Henry's the Guard Tamer, interesting, I wonder what Ryo kill be Legendary Tamer or something new Kazu could be the Robo Tamer or something and Kenta is Pink Cute Fairy Tamer! AHAHAHA! And Jeri is the Lion Tamer. I love Kazu and Kenta comic relief is good and they're good at it.
ShadowLDrago chapter 12 . 2/4/2013
I wonder how Jen and co would react to the knowledge that Rika was a lesbian? I wonder...
ShadowLDrago chapter 11 . 2/4/2013
A lesbian Ruki? Well color me surprised, I didn't see that coming, not that I mind, you did say female/Female was a pairing and I just thought you ment Reika and Megumi. If I had a lesbian Ruki I would have paired her most likely with Juri but I don't mind this, it's quite amusing to see a bit of the rare lesbian romance and humor in this rather dark fic.
ShadowLDrago chapter 10 . 2/4/2013
Wow, and I thought I had a gutter mind, Kazu is the worst, however it just lightens the mood in the nightmare field.
ShadowLDrago chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
Huh, Susie's a Tamer too? That was fast.
ShadowLDrago chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
I wonder where Renamon is and what exactly Ruki did...
Androgynous-Heron chapter 20 . 11/20/2010
i feel pity for Ice Devimon really i do
mafia king chapter 2 . 10/25/2010
WHY WHY WHY why the hell does every fic has to have takato as some wimp loser can't anyone write one that dose not make you want to just throw him bottle of poison
Quill-and-Parchment chapter 21 . 8/21/2010
Alrighty then...this shall be the third fic I've reviewed since coming in here at the beginning of summer. Let's go over a few things: plot, characterization, action scenes, dialogues, details and pacing.

Plot: Quite good. It keeps me gripped for more than a day, and that's a great accomplishment. I can't tell you how many times I've clicked the back button after the first paragraph. However, there are some instances where I realize that I can't see the plot anywhere, just a bunch of folks running about getting beaten up (especially Takato, though why you hated him so much I don't want to know). But you pretty much got down clear and cool, which is good. No problem there.

Characterization: Well done. I like the characters here here WAY more than the original anime, even. It's probably one of the strongest factors that kept me reading after the first chapter. Takato is a bit of a damsel in distress, but at least he knew he was useless and actually hated it, unlike so many others that makes me want to puke. Jenrya's cool, and so is Shuichon. Rika - well, I didn't read the reviews for your story yet, but I can imagine what they will say after...what you did to her. But that's okay. She's interesting as a character, and I appreciate that. All in all, really great, even though it is AU.

Action scenes: Hallelujah! A writer who knows his action scenes! Very detailed, very smoothly paced with the bit of feelings and/or dialouge stuck in between to spice things up a bit. Best I've seen all month 'round, save for another dude who wrote an OC story. On behave of my eyeballs and my sanity, I thank you for not slapping on some dialouge, some random thoughts, some fleeting description and declare it done.

Dialouge: It didn't fill up the entire fic like so many others did, which is good. Very good. And it actually got an ounce of feeling in it. You did not fail in this aspect, and it only makes your story more enjoyable. Excellent.

Details: I know exactly where I was, what's happening and everything in between as well as how another character is feeling or sensing. Extraordinary.

Pacing: Once again, the best. The chapters followed each other closely and chronically, with great details and all. You actually got a bridge connecting actions together here, and that was (somehow) one of the biggest problems fanfiction writers have these days.

To sum it up: this piece is somethin I enjoyed reading and will enjoy rereading it again. Thank you for your work that you have shared with us. I will surely look forward to your next installment.

Quill
Loki the Wolf-Fox chapter 6 . 4/10/2010
One of the most exciting stories I've read here in the Digimon archive here.

Tacy
Loki the Wolf-Fox chapter 5 . 4/10/2010
That was a disturbing Ruki/IceDevimon moment.

Good chapter by the way.

Tacy (dang I keep forgetting to put this at the end of my reviews!)
Loki the Wolf-Fox chapter 3 . 4/9/2010
Though this was a bit slow at the beginning it REALLY picked up in the last two chapters.

I'm really starting to love it.
andy132 chapter 8 . 1/17/2010
Yo, I tried to read this fic especially since Impmon is one of my favourites and the thought of him and Takato seemed interesting. But to be honest I was bored and confused at first but now I'm just disappointed. I was surprised at how weak you made Takato to be honest it seemed like you had some grudge against him. There are more things I'd like to say but I don't want to insult you so good luck with your fic.
Azure Neko chapter 19 . 12/13/2009
I read this story a while ago and ran headlong into your rewrite annoucement. Very irritating, but I got over it. I have one small request. I want you to hold on to this line for the revised edition.

“Oh, beautiful,” Impmon said. “So should we just go out there and bend over from the start? That way they can't miss when they rape us up the assholes!”

This line is absolutely fantastic. It's one of those lines that pops into my head at random moments of the day and makes me crack up for no apparent reason. You cannot afford to discard it.
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