|Reviews for Betrayal|
| IgnisDivine chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Fantastic and unique. I've also dropped a fanfic 10 years ago, got a bunch of reviews and after so long, thought I should give it a chance and continue. I hope you do the same with 'Betrayal'. I also got some ideas in case you're looking for some.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2017
It would be a pity not to continue.
| Hollydoor chapter 10 . 11/25/2013
Can't wait to read more
| Cammie chapter 10 . 11/23/2013
This story I amazing, I wish you would have finished it.
| BelleMorte09 chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
| nequam-tenshi chapter 10 . 8/6/2009
It's maddening! I want to know what happens next! Will they get off without being know ?
Are you planning on finishing or updating?
| Enchantress Nova chapter 10 . 6/9/2009
why did you stop writing? no fair! *cries*
this is one of my favourite stories
| Yuma chapter 10 . 7/2/2008
I've just stumbled upon this fic by chance. What a great discovery I've made!
Such a pity I'll never see the end of it (maybe you do have lost chapters into your HD, but that's wishfull thinking... don't mind me), I just got to let you know it was great while it lasted.
| Norwegian Eyes chapter 10 . 12/16/2007
it's been YEARS since you wrote this but you should continue it.
i read this fic YEARS ago,and Velasa(sp?) told me where to find !
| Cabbitshivers chapter 10 . 7/10/2006
Fantastic. I would love to see more of this. I can tell that you were enjoying yourself while you were writing it, but sometimes these things just fall away from you, don't they?
You have done a wonderful job with what you have here. The decriptions and flow of the story make it very easy to read and to understand, and your character manipulations make them and their situations seem very tangible. Well done.
I read that you didn't want Dragonball Z to die. I'd like not to see this piece of work die. Too many fantastic stories are fading away now, and I would dearly hate to not know how this one is going to end.
Please, if you do have no intention of finishing, or feel that you don't think you can finish it, could you tell me how you were planning to end it? I would be greateful. Then, in my memories, I can have a finish.
You've done a fantastic job. I thank you for what you do have here.
| kurikim chapter 9 . 10/25/2005
It's me again, link. Once again reminding you that a lot of people like your story and would appreciate an update. D
| itsasledgehammer chapter 10 . 7/10/2005
Cant wait for more!
| link chapter 10 . 6/15/2005
Really, I know everyone would greatly appreciate it. You have such a good writing style, and you're story is just plain out good. It's a pleasure to read what you write, so please update this story. We'd all be very grateful.
| Volcanic chapter 10 . 5/10/2005
YOU MUST CONTINUE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!
| Invader Kit Membrain chapter 10 . 3/24/2005