Reviews for Let Me Make It Alright |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I love how you leave everything up in the air at each chapter! It makes the story that more exciting! Because, you're all like, OMG! What's gonna happen next? I gotta find out! YAY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ho' CRAP! Man, this just gets better and better! In this fic, we have, drama, romance, AND comedy! YAY! *throws confetti in the freaking air* WHOOT! *squeals* I am off to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MAN! This chapter was so freaking POWERFUL! I must say, and I believe everyone has been warned, NEVER BE IN THE SAME CAR WHEN SQUALL IS SUPER PISSED AND DRVING! Holy crap! Poor lil' Seifey! *pats him on the head and gives him a squall plushie and squall shaped cookies* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this chapter was AWESOME! I love it how you always write good length chapters! YAY! Poor Squall! No squall! You dummy head! Seifer loves you! Don't run away from him! *chases after Squall in a monster truck* Get your leather wrapped ass back here! *pouts* |
![]() ![]() ![]() MAN! Seifer SO has to be lookin' so hot in that outfit he's wearing on the date! *giggles* Haha! I am still laughing at your comment! "Now, smacks Seifer, go out there and make me proud" That's right Seifer! *smacks him too* The next chapter I read better have you confessing to little Squally, or I shall PERSONALLY shove the hilt of Hyperion up your sexy ass! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! They are gonna go out on a date! *throws confetti in the air* Man, I gotta go read the next chappie right away! La~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this chapter was VERY well thought out! It was perfectly believable! I can SO see how Squall and Rinoa wouldn't work together! Man, you got straight to the point! I loved it! Haha! Poor Seifer! I can tell that every written test he took he probably flunked! *giggles* Then again, he makes up for it with his sexiness! (haha) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man, this chapter was AWESOME. Man, this story is so very well written, I wouldn't be suprised if you wrote your own book one day and get hundreds of fans... When this line came upI TOTALLY knew what Kodawaki or whatever her name is meant! “He'll be fine. This isn't the first time he has done this. Let’s return to the others.” She's talking about when Seifer and Squall had that battle where they first got the scars, right? Like, Seifer carried squall to the infirmary and treated him too right? In the actual game, they don't say anything about who treated/carried squall back to the infimary, but we all know it was secrety our little Seifey who did it! (haha!) *gets shot by Seifer for calling him that cheesey nickname* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God.. This is like, the best ever.. Two thumbs up! No, no.. Make that three, Nope, four.. Oh, who am I kidding? It's a hundred! A hundred thumbs up to you! *squeals! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was stunning - read it from beginning to end in one night (okay, so it took me... 12 hours to do so but shh.) and it even almost made me cry. For someone that never cries, that's a feat. Absolutely beautiful. Thank the gods for writers like you |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful story, truly wonderful, took me 2 and 1/2 days but it was totally worth it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok there seems to be a problem with Ch.14, for some reason no matter what I do it loads the search screan with results for Yugioh results, now is this some subliminal prompting from you to get people to read yugioh? Or is it a site error, please find out I'm loving this story too much to have to miss a chapter, I'll skip it for now but can u e-mail me if you sort it thanx! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And to think I thought you couldn't get any better... o_o I was very late in finding this... but oh well. _" I love the amount of detail you put in any your style of writing. The romance behind, the conflict of thoughts, the interactions... EVERYTHING! All of it was beautifully weaved into a single story. While I can easily pick out all the little cliches (which I USUALLY, not always, loathe with great passion), that you placed it, I'm not. You managed to spin those cliches into something workable, and something that isn't overused. Each moment that I read this was a truly good reading experience and the final few chapters kept me captivated. Keep writing! Youre REALLY good! ) Azarethian Titan |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I finished the story, THIS IS FREAKING ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! DEAR GOD! I cried at the last two chapters. That was horrible angst you put there :'] Dear Hyne... I absolutely dear God loved Seifer in this story. He was so happy and everything! Not barbs and sarcasm as usual! This story is my favourite SeiferSquall, no freaking doubt about it. Oh, I've got a good song for this story D Might be said once or twice, but it's Run by Snow Patrol. Download and listen XD. Great job on the story. I read it over two days ~ and I love this! You have a lot of patience ;_; You own SxS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O WOW! THAT WAS THE BEST FANFIC I'VE EVER READ! omg! the ending was so beautiful! *cries* YOU HAD ME IN TEARS! WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING! *sniffle* YOU HAD ME THINKING SQUALL WAS DEAD! *glomps* BUT THANKS FOR THE GREAT ENDING AND BRINGING HIM BACK! thank you thank you, you are truly amazing angry angel! |