This is an interesting plot beginning, but I couldn't get further than two chapters before the missing commas and grammatical errors made me have to stop. It's been a long day, and taking a four-hour AP test really isn't conducive to patience with grammar errors. Sorry.

I'm not sure if you are still here but I come back to this story every once in a while because it warrants being read and reread. It was so full of angst and that's what we love in our fan fiction now, isn't it? I wish you would write more because you really were very good. :) Hope all is well.

Joan

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Very, very good fic! Loads of events, loads of variation, and I like this competant-but-not-overbearing version of Anamarie.

The very first POTC fan fic that I ever read, a long time ago... and still one of my favorites!

This is one of the few fan fiction stories I actually enjoyed. Even though you ‘added’ your own voice to these characters you still kept a lot of their original ‘feel’ and that’s what really drew me in. Also the fact that you didn’t make Elizabeth into the evil witch lol

I hope you will write more some time. I read and enjoyed all your posts.

Hello!

first of all: Thank you for such an amazing fiction! Today it's my birthday and yesterday I printed it so to say as a birthday present :)) *g*

It was a great birthday present!

I LOVED the part where Jack saves Norrington's life! That's just wonderful!

THANK YOU FOR THIS FANFICTION!

You are absolutely BRILLIANT! Your writing is enspiring. And the flawless portray of character through out the story... I absolutley loved it. I am greatly anticipating the continued posting of the sequel. Please do so soon! Chapter 10!

I only found this story after it was finished, but it was well worth the long hours reading it. I loved this story, there's so few out there that are able to have both Norrington and Jack together and keep them in-character, but you managed it perfectly.

Good story! Well-written, and it's obvious you did a fair amount of research to make it historically accurate. And nautically, and geographically, and militarily, and medically and so on. Good job!

Love how Jack pushed his way through the crowd and asked for his hat back. LOL!

How sad-people thinking Jack is dead! I like the little flashback to the part on the Interceptor during the movie - nice touch.

Whew. Jack's okay. I was a little worried for a minute there. Just a tad. Good chapter! I like all the interaction between Jack and Anamaria.

Hello! Wow, it's been a long time since I reviewed this story. Sorry, I got distracted by other things. But tonight, I was looking for some good fanfic that is well-written, has Jack in-character, and no annoying Mary-Sue's, and well, your story fits all those criteria! Good job!

Good story. I like the description of Jack being pelted with questions from all the little kids. I can just see that!