Reviews for Pathways Completed
Syolen chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Waoh ! There are too few of them but I never get tired of reading Allen and Marlene stories. And yours is GREAT ! Congratulations !
Ron and his Sakura chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
hey , an A and Marlene fic! For the most part, very nice, your writing style is lovely, very descriptive. the early years of Allen at home were esp well done (though we think Roelef could have been more sympathetic to a grieving allen)

Just a few nitpicky points though (because we tend to be nitpicky on the details)

there are 12 Caeli, not 13

eries and Allen are the same age

Marlene attended the tournament where she saw Allen with her Uncle Nueva, not her dad.

Will you be writing more? we'd like that
mystlady chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
WOW. this must have taken you a long time to write this. Sadly to say, Allen is not the fave character here in this section. It's very good and refreshing to see a very positive story for him once.
Heaven-Dragoon chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Hi Yuriko!I love your story A LOT, it's nothing less then fantastic!

I'm so happy to be one of the firsts to review (Maybe the first of all) such a beautiful fan fiction. I love Allen so much..too bad there are not many stories about him and Marlene.

I hope you go on writing more of that kind because you're very good at it!

Good Work!