|Reviews for Mononokehime Continuation|
| momiji-k chapter 21 . 3/19/2006
It's been a few chapters since I posted any comments. This seems to be a good time. There is a big difference in your writing skills just as you said in your notes. Not that they weren't good to begin with, just that they are now even better.
Your descriptions and detail have always been thourough. I have been impressed at the level of attention you give to describe buildings, towns, the wilderness. It's very nice to see someone putting in this much detail.
Congratdulations on all of your accomplishments (both in writing and in life!).
| SwordOfLightBladeOfDarkness chapter 25 . 3/19/2006
| momiji-k chapter 15 . 3/19/2006
oh praise the lord, paragraphs with spacing! :) Sorry to be such a nag about this but it makes it so much easier to read.
I'm enjoying the story, I look forward to reading each chapter.
| momiji-k chapter 12 . 3/18/2006
I've been reading right through these chapters in one sitting. The story is very good. I still have to say I am not fond of the absence of paragraphs. It's just so hard to concentrate on the words.
Great story just the same. That is still the only complaint I have. :)
| momiji-k chapter 3 . 3/18/2006
This story is really good so far. I just have one problem with it. The text is too compacted. The paragrahs should be spaced. The current layout is hard on the eye and very hard not to lose your places.
But the writing is great!
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Looks good so far. :)
| The Time Traveler chapter 25 . 3/5/2006
Nice chapter! Very nice job! This is getting very intense! Keep it up!
| shelter chapter 25 . 2/24/2006
For chapters 24 & 25:
You've got some very heavy material here. I like the way you've expanded the chapters to give a full scale of the battle. But there are times when I think there is unecessary lenghtening of the story, and the very close battle for Irontown can become a bit draggy. The last chapter was a bit too focused on San's progress; I don't disagree at the battle scene you're trying to show, but it would've been helpful if there were breaks in the action - lapses from which the battle can be seen from the inside, or from Asano's viewpoint, or from that of Azuma's again.
Other than that, the long battle definitely serves it purpose. Perhaps I will see it with better clarity later on.
| DarK Shad0w chapter 25 . 2/22/2006
I loved it Its really good.
It must be hard for San to see her brothers died .
I hope Ashitaka arrives quickly
| Lilyxxxhentai chapter 25 . 2/22/2006
You just write what you can. we're all looking forward to the next chapter, I hope to read more of your story.
(starts sobbing) it was so sad when her brothers died. sniff... they were all she had left of her family(suddenly stops) oh and whens ashitaka and san going to be together again... and have a steamy lemon, lol.
| Dar Sel'La chapter 25 . 2/21/2006
Well, I can only say that I hope San gets a better view of what is going on inside Town before she runs accros Eboshi. And that Ashitaka shows up soon, they are going to need his strength.
| Enigmatics chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Effervescent and fast-paced -and very realistic, which is more than I can say for most Mononoke Hime Fics out here. Hope you haven't discontinued this, as it's a great read.
| Lilyxxxhentai chapter 24 . 2/6/2006
Can't wait to see what happens between ashitaka and san.
i just hope you won't stiff me on the romance like the movie did. kissing, petting, love making... anything lol.
but anyway I read this story begining to end in one sitting, couldn't stop reading it was so good. i am looking forward to your next update. your friend Damian :)
| The Time Traveler chapter 24 . 1/27/2006
Nice work. Very nice job. So the battle has begun. I can't wait to see what happens when Ashitaka returns. Adios until the next time.
| ThebigW chapter 24 . 1/25/2006
Grossed him out?
Why, I oughta...
But seriously, an amazing job considering the missing notes. Can't wait for Ashitaka's return, as you're bringing this all together quite nicely.
Don't let the stress get to you, and get well soon. If upcoming chapters are as good as what we've been given, I, for one, can wait.