|Reviews for The Story of Gohan|
| jimmy chapter 22 . 7/9
i liked the book but hated the ending when gohan died and could not come back to life using the dragon balls
| Alam chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
chapter 2 was probably the worst chapter you ever did its just like the show
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Best/saddest story I've read in a long time. I must have cried for about 10 minutes. The heartbreak in the story, the sacrifices, and Vegeta's personality change were gut wrenching. I wish you made a sequel.
| bumike99 chapter 22 . 3/24/2015
This story is incredible. I almost teared up at the end of it when Gohan sacrificed himself, absolutely amazing writing.
| df chapter 22 . 12/3/2014
whens next one?
| slama cow chapter 22 . 3/31/2014
This story is so sad
| MikeAlphaGamer chapter 21 . 8/16/2013
This is how DBZ should have been!
Now don't get me wrong, I am absolutely heart broken, and will never forgive you for killing Gohan.
But it was an absolutely perfect, and epic, story!
| Jack1157 chapter 22 . 9/16/2011
This was amazing. This has to be one of my favorite fanfics ever. The beginning of the story wasn't all that original but the way the story was told, the timing, keeping the characters realistic, and the way it ended were all superb. The ending was physically draining, it was one of the most emotional and unexpected edings I have ever read and I enjoyed every second of it. Gohans choice left me throughly drained and slightly depressed but I wouldn't change a thing. You truly are a skilled writer it is unfortunate that you no longer contribute to my Gohan and Videl addiction.
| gohanxvidelforever chapter 21 . 4/24/2011
this is my 2nd favorite fanfic ever the ending was so sad i cried for like 5 minutes i wish gohan and videl could be together in the end tho otherwise it was perfect i give it a 9.75/10 great fic
| n9horsesbubbles chapter 21 . 4/5/2011
I...CANT...BELIEVE...YOU...KILLED...GOHAN! WHY DID YOU KILL MY PRECIOUS GOHAN! YOU DESTROYED HIS SPIRIT! Ok, enough of me ranting and raving about this... I just finished reading, and I absolutely love the story. It really shows what great potential all the saiyans (yes, im mostly talking about Gohan) are possible off. Although, I have to tell you, that for some reason I really hated that you just switched Gohan's and Vegeta's place with the Z Sword. I really don't know why, but it ticks me off alot for some reason. Seeing the rest of your story I just felt that you could've made up something better for that situation. Besides the little switch, and the fact that you KILLED EVERYTHING ABOUT GOHAN I think Toriyama should seriously consider animating this, and getting rid of the ridiculous end they had to the DBZ series in the first place. Now, that is just my opinion, so I don't expect some Goku fanboys showing up at my house with some chainsaws and axes. I havn't read the sequel but I've got to say, I'm really looking forward to it, and encourage you to update, add another chapter, etc. whenever you can because you have no idea how many people love your writing. And I also have to say: this story at the very end made me cry my heart out, and even though I'm a sap for movies I am not for books, because I am one of those critics out there that will blow up at the littlest mistakes (besides spelling errors and nonsense like that) so you did outstanding! Made me cry. Thank you so much for writing this unforgettable story, and I am so lucky to have been able to read it. Authors like you make me look at my own writing and want to improve beyond improving. Again, Thank-you for writing it and I give you 9/10 stars. (I would give you 10/10 but I really dont like it that you killed Gohan ENTIRELY, I mean I wouldn't have minded if he went to Otherworld and could be brought back, but it really tugged at my heart to see that you completely killed him. Well, sorry for the stupidly long response, but I wanted to voice my opinion and I will thank you again for probably the tenth time, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :D
| for real chapter 7 . 2/27/2011
wow. i didnt know allowed manuscripts of the anime series.
| ThatGuy chapter 16 . 8/7/2010
Actually, Piccolo was originally one.
| lazyguy90 chapter 21 . 1/25/2010
Holy crap this was incredibly epic. Brilliant. I also feel that all that effort being placed into portraying Gohan as a being of limitless potential was wasted by the Buu Saga and Dragonball GT... Anyway fantastic work on this. I can't wait to read the sequel.
| exiled-druid chapter 22 . 12/12/2009
wow. simply wow.
| twilightm00n chapter 22 . 5/9/2009
Damn this was good. I can't begin to tell you how happy I was that there was a sequel too.