|Reviews for The Family Name|
| S0lng3l0-4eva3 chapter 6 . 10/1
Personally I prefer no romance for Temi
I prefer karatemaster101's story to this already but meh it will be fine ig
| ImperialProcrastination chapter 19 . 11/11/2021
God the characterisations are brilliant, hilarious, and spot on for the AU combo
| Thatsadenby chapter 6 . 2/5/2021
Everything about this gives gay vibes. Its like the ultimate 'haven't quite figured out they're gay but have a crush' story. (-it is very much appreciated-).
(now for the actual review): I really love the characterisation of Malfoy and the Slytherin house in general. I haven't got very far but its great already! thanks for writing this.
| TheIdeator chapter 31 . 8/16/2020
The overall writing was good. But here's what I found lacking :
1) Artemis wasn't portrayed properly. Not at all. Not one bit.
2) His ace against the basilisk was a bit weak.
3) The reason he went to the Malfoy Manor was weak. And while it was a good addition , it was unnecessary. Also why wasn't the entire LEP involved ? They were for Fowl.
4) While this is more of a ' me ' problem. I don't think Artemis fits on the Harry Potter universe. Code Geass is perhaps a better option
5) The whole Fowl/Malfoy rivalry. It doesn't make sense. I can imagine Draco being a stuck up brat but not Fowl. Not even when he's 12.
6)Finally. A lot of excess information. I had to skip a few paragraphs so that the story would proceed.
Now what I liked :
1) Frankly , it was refreshing to see things from Malfoy's perspective.
2) Generally well written and easy to read.
3) The fact that it's completed.
| i hate yall chapter 6 . 7/8/2020
i dont really care its not artemis/draco slash bc honestly they wouldn't work well together anyway but the fuck you mean "don't worry, they're straight!"? like? ok bitch
why cant i find one (1) artemis fowl/harry potter crossover that isn't homophobic tbh
| ProfessorBowties chapter 25 . 6/21/2020
About the Malfoys being known to Ravenclaw, the first Malfoy arrived in Britain in 1066, after the founding of Hogwarts so I don't believe that they could be related somehow.
| Hidari chapter 6 . 6/20/2020
Six chapters in and now I have to leave a review. I'm loving it. I just did a 9 book reread binge after trying to watch that awful movie. Jumping to fanfiction right after made me realize that Artemis is very hard to write. I think you've done an excellent job. He's not quite like the books. But I can imagine him being like this after meeting the fairies and being in a situation where he's giving school a chance. You've done a good job keeping him believable.
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2020
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/5/2020
It’s okay but Artemis is really ooc prolly because you need him to be that way so the story doesn’t end to quickly it’s kinda getting on my nerves
| MiaTheRavenclaw chapter 7 . 4/20/2020
Harry says: Why on earth would someone like Malfoy.
Artemis: Thank you, author.
Draco: WHY ON EARTH WOULD I LIKE FOWL?
WHY DO PEOPLE WANT THIS?
| MiaTheRavenclaw chapter 6 . 4/20/2020
Thank you. I'm glad it's not Artemis/Draco. Also, nice job. Are you going to add Theodore Nott in?
| ProfessorBowties chapter 15 . 4/7/2020
Neither second years nor first years take Care of Magical Creatures. I noticed this in the conversation between Artemis and Ginny where someone said that they were studying Bowtruckles.
| ProfessorBowties chapter 12 . 4/7/2020
Neville's grandmother's name was Augusta, not
Eunice. I also wanted to ask, why do you sometimes repeat a scene of the previous chapter at the beginning of the next one?
| WingedEagle chapter 9 . 3/10/2020
Excellent concept, poorly executed. Allowing the MC to comment that he's acting OOC does not make it okay, just more difficult.
| HungryisI chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
OH MY GOSH! I know I'm overreacting here but like: the day Artemis reports to Hogwarts is actually my birthday! Pretty Ironic right?