Reviews for The Family Name
lukeanimelover chapter 9 . 6/9
Yeah… definitely not portraying Artemis that well…
lukeanimelover chapter 9 . 6/9
I think Artemis is just a tad more expressive then usual, and although i know this isnt Artemis x Draco but the chemistry is very thick… unconfortably thick…
lukeanimelover chapter 1 . 6/9
Okay… you definately need to fucking update this story and seperate the chapters. Theres no way i can read this without binging it all, otherwise ill lose the place. And i like listening to it on Audio sometimes since just reading can get a little boring. So, yeah, update this shit.
S0lng3l0-4eva3 chapter 6 . 10/1/2023
Personally I prefer no romance for Temi

I prefer karatemaster101's story to this already but meh it will be fine ig
ImperialProcrastination chapter 19 . 11/11/2021
God the characterisations are brilliant, hilarious, and spot on for the AU combo
Thatsadenby chapter 6 . 2/5/2021
Everything about this gives gay vibes. Its like the ultimate 'haven't quite figured out they're gay but have a crush' story. (-it is very much appreciated-).

(now for the actual review): I really love the characterisation of Malfoy and the Slytherin house in general. I haven't got very far but its great already! thanks for writing this.
TheIdeator chapter 31 . 8/16/2020
The overall writing was good. But here's what I found lacking :
1) Artemis wasn't portrayed properly. Not at all. Not one bit.
2) His ace against the basilisk was a bit weak.
3) The reason he went to the Malfoy Manor was weak. And while it was a good addition , it was unnecessary. Also why wasn't the entire LEP involved ? They were for Fowl.
4) While this is more of a ' me ' problem. I don't think Artemis fits on the Harry Potter universe. Code Geass is perhaps a better option
5) The whole Fowl/Malfoy rivalry. It doesn't make sense. I can imagine Draco being a stuck up brat but not Fowl. Not even when he's 12.
6)Finally. A lot of excess information. I had to skip a few paragraphs so that the story would proceed.

Now what I liked :
1) Frankly , it was refreshing to see things from Malfoy's perspective.
2) Generally well written and easy to read.
3) The fact that it's completed.
i hate yall chapter 6 . 7/8/2020
i dont really care its not artemis/draco slash bc honestly they wouldn't work well together anyway but the fuck you mean "don't worry, they're straight!"? like? ok bitch

why cant i find one (1) artemis fowl/harry potter crossover that isn't homophobic tbh
ProfessorBowties chapter 25 . 6/21/2020
About the Malfoys being known to Ravenclaw, the first Malfoy arrived in Britain in 1066, after the founding of Hogwarts so I don't believe that they could be related somehow.
Hidari chapter 6 . 6/20/2020
Six chapters in and now I have to leave a review. I'm loving it. I just did a 9 book reread binge after trying to watch that awful movie. Jumping to fanfiction right after made me realize that Artemis is very hard to write. I think you've done an excellent job. He's not quite like the books. But I can imagine him being like this after meeting the fairies and being in a situation where he's giving school a chance. You've done a good job keeping him believable.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2020
fucking shit
Guest chapter 9 . 5/5/2020
It’s okay but Artemis is really ooc prolly because you need him to be that way so the story doesn’t end to quickly it’s kinda getting on my nerves
MiaTheRavenclaw chapter 7 . 4/20/2020
Harry says: Why on earth would someone like Malfoy.
Ron: ?
Artemis: Thank you, author.
Draco: WHY ON EARTH WOULD I LIKE FOWL?
Zabini:...
WHY DO PEOPLE WANT THIS?
MiaTheRavenclaw chapter 6 . 4/20/2020
Thank you. I'm glad it's not Artemis/Draco. Also, nice job. Are you going to add Theodore Nott in?
ProfessorBowties chapter 15 . 4/7/2020
Neither second years nor first years take Care of Magical Creatures. I noticed this in the conversation between Artemis and Ginny where someone said that they were studying Bowtruckles.
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