|Reviews for This Time Imperfect|
| Serieve chapter 13 . 9/7/2005
Another really really good story that I hope you will continue with soon.
| Aiakia chapter 3 . 6/27/2005
I'm really glad that I found this story on read it a while back on media miner, but it was never updated, so you can only imagine my joy right now!
| Daeira chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Okay... I've waited for about...2 years now. So UPDATE ALREADY!
| Ilvinaeda chapter 14 . 12/22/2004
Quite intersting...very detailed up until the point where you stopped. I thought it was going well...if you decide on a good ending, please add it. It would make the story seem, It sounds like it needs to end with the death of Jenova and something happening to the materia/Aeris as a result...just a suggestion if you wish to continue. Wonderful fiction.
| Noacat chapter 14 . 6/17/2004
Okay. So I've been bumming with the realization that there will be no more Pale Angel. Then HEY, why not read another of your fics. So here I am again, waiting for the updaties. Neat premise you have here. I wonder, will our dear Flower Girl awaken? Will Seph be able to stop Jenova? Will everyone be turned into hideous monsters? I suppose I'll have to stay tuned. Not that I mind much. I'm enjoying the hell out of reading your stuff. Keep up the excellent work!
| Jess Angel chapter 14 . 1/22/2004
Man, how did I miss this chapter? Must've been a glitch on my author alerts at the time er something. Good thing I checked up on this! Phew _ Another well done, detailed chapter. Sad to see what happened to Wutai. I wonder how this going to be stopped. What exactly is Seph gonna do? Hm. Well, I hope you continue :D I'll be waiting patiently for the next part. Keep at it.
Writing rocks! So write on!
| SolarCloud chapter 14 . 11/13/2003
I would talk about the poem at the beginning except it isn't actually yours, and a review might not be all that welcome if it involves constructive criticism. People get prickly about that sometimes if the thing belongs to someone else. o.o;
You're good about updating. Have you been in a hurry lately? I noticed a spelling error or two, and a few grammatical mistakes. I enjoyed the part where the man liquefied and I shall most certainly check back for new chapters! -
| Aeris chapter 14 . 11/8/2003
Yey! You updated! This chapter's really nice! Can't wait for more of the action! Please continue!
| SolarCloud chapter 13 . 10/25/2003
Ack. My favorite town in the entire game. o.o
I only caught one spelling error in chapters 12 and 13 (and it was a simple one to make), and all punctuation was flawless (though I wasn't really checking). Characterization is still good. Still interesting.
| DracOnyx chapter 13 . 10/24/2003
While not quite able to post, I can still read, and I want to read more of this ; ) Please continue.
| blackdog530 chapter 13 . 10/15/2003
Holy jeebus, this is awesome. You've managed to turn the three most overdone plotlines in FF7 fics, and make something completely new! Keep writing, and update soon!
| Mdnight chapter 13 . 10/14/2003
GREAT story. I love the plot. I can't wait to read more!
| MissAnneThropee chapter 13 . 10/13/2003
Really, really good. I luv seph/aeris stories, u gotta put some more of that in the later chapters.
Keep up the good work.
P.S I had to add this to my fav stories list. U got me hooked.
| Amarie and the Inexplicable 3 chapter 9 . 10/8/2003
I just realized I hadn't reviewed since chapter two! *bonks self on head* Must remember.
Anyways, the plot has developed very nicely so far - it's quite plausible, and an angle I've never seen before. Even if it wasn't, I love the way you write Jenova so much that I wouldn't mind at all.
And you've been updating so fast! *starry eyes* How nice! Off to read the rest now...
| Jess Angel chapter 13 . 10/8/2003
I loved the Aeris and Sephiroth moments in chapter 12. I like how you express and brought out that kind of understanding that has begun to form between them. And having Vincent tell Seph about his real mother, Lucrecia, very nice touch.
This chapter had such vivid and powerful descriptions of Jenova and everything that is going on with her return. Your doing a good job on this. I can't wait until you really get into this storyline.
Keep it up, and till next time!