Oh wow. Hey it's Arabellay, finally logged in to my actual account.
Just wanted to say how much I loved this chapter. Your writing is just so on-point at the end, and how James expresses everything is so clear and concise, I felt like everything in the scene was just really well done and yeah... great piece of work that was. This is officially one of my favourites.

I love how you did that, and how they both had their moments where they realized things that Lily as James had been doing/not doing.
Just, very smart and realistic and well-written.
Keep up the good work!

I'd just like to point out how much the writing has improved since you started this story, not only do you notice more with your editing and everything, but the character development and storyline in general is a lot more realistic and generally just impressive.
Keep it up!

Oh wow, that end scene was great ahaha, I can only imagine what Remus'll get out of that xD

That's literally one of the best written versions of Dumbledore I've ever seen in a fanfiction. Props to you, I am THOROUGHLY impressed _

I liked that they shared the thestral thing, but I feel like Lily's reason was a bit... shallow? Idk. I feel like they could've really connected if both of the deaths were meaningful...
anyway, that's one of the only criticisms I've ever had for this story tbh.
You're fab, wish I could write like you do, and the idea for the whole thing is awesome ahaha xD

Idk what I would choose if I had read this when I came out, but omg, I got butterflies when he said his name as James just \(O_O)/
I don't even know ahaha

Ohhh I got so excited when she said that omg om gom g omaogkasd
xD
It made me smile so much ahaha.
Fangirling over here.
Don't mind me.

'Rumour has it'
xD

Oh wow. Even though I'm reading this literally years after you've published it, I'd just like to say a) how freaking awesome that chapter was and b) how wonderfully appreciative you are of reviewers as a writer! My goodness! You literally replied to everyone and to me that shows how you're not just a good writer, but you're actually kinda just a good person, so yeah, you keep that up.
:P

Oh gosh. And I bet James felt so bad because Lily'd gone to practise and everything xD Poor ol' sod ahaha

I really liked how you showed what Derek was thinking earlier, it really added to the dramatic irony of the situation, and how we all know what James is thinking and how Derek is approaching it and just, omg, can't wait to read the next one ahahaha

Oh wow, that was great ahaha
Props to you, I am thoroughly impressed with that chapter, and it was HEAPS long too!

I am literally so glad you're doing this ahaha, it's waaaaay too funny! xD

Yeah... except when us females get hit in the boob... Then it hurts like death.