Reviews for A Walk in Your Shoes
littlx1 chapter 3 . 10/10/2003
Yea! Good post! How often do you post? I'll be looking forward to your next installment!
PVBookworm chapter 3 . 10/9/2003
Sorry, I don't know what AU means. :-( I wish did, if you find out, let me know!

I liked the Divinitation class! James's retortes were so good!

A suggestion: You might try breaking up some of your longer paragraphs a bit. I found it kinda hard to read when there was so much so close together.

I look forward to updates!
Libberacious chapter 2 . 10/2/2003
Hey Spirit007-

This is a snazzy story! It is a bit rough sometimes (a little confusing) but basically nicely written for a first story and pretty funny. You must have a fantastic beta *cough* me *cough*. Keep it up.
flossie1 chapter 2 . 9/27/2003
(honestly- i have no more "cheese and crackers" comments- i only just woke up- im still snoozy-) however- i love this fic! the only thing i can say about it is that your swithing from him to her alot. :)

but its okay- im getting it.
elvencherry07 chapter 2 . 9/26/2003
LOL... sounds like fun!
PiXiEdUsT chapter 2 . 9/26/2003
OMGosh - I love your story WRITE MORE SOON- you should have a part where like While their in each others body they get kissed by the same gender- like where lily is in James's body get her to be kissed by that Valerie girl and Where JAmes is in Lily's body let her get kissed by that Derek kid- Anywho no matter what you do i luv your story - you have an awesome imagination.
icyfire2 chapter 2 . 9/26/2003
great story!
PVBookworm chapter 2 . 9/25/2003
MWPP means Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs. It took me forever to figure it our too!

I really liked Lily's reaction to finding out she was in James's body. That was great! I also liked how Dumbledore's in on this whole and worked through Peeves!

By the way, PV is my school name.
becca williams chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
i LOVE it so far! keep up the good work! its a really good idea. Dont let the flamers stop u! u rock buttox!

flossie1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
holy cheese and crackers! i want more!
littlx1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
Interesting! Do continue!
PVBookworm chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
I like it! I've heard of the idea before, but it's how you write it that matters.

I actually know someone named Valerie Thompson, how weird is that?
elvencherry07 chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
lol, looks interesting!
julyeighth chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
THat was cool! PLease continue!
Storymind chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
I think it's excellent! Please write more!
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