I really enjoyed this. There was so much humanity in both characters that we were never shown before.

i love it!

This is really good, I enjoyed reading it! Jack and James are two of my fav characters and I love how you wrote their interaction.

I like your portrayal of Jack.

Excellent. You've got their relationship down, I think. I enjoyed this so much. (Even if you lacked the omniscience to divine Norrington's first name...lol.)

Lovely story. Thanks so much for writing it.

this is really good, but just for the record, Norrington's name is 'James', not 'Edward'.

I believe I've read this story at least three times over, and I can't believe I haven't reviewed or added it to my favorites list! This last time I had to go through Google to find the story with summary keywords to find it; I'm so glad I did!

I love how personal this story is. The plot is simplistic, but still has so much substance! Both Jack and James are perfectly in character. The whole thing is written wonderfully, including grammatically and stylistically.

Thank you for sharing your writing!

I thought this story was well written. I liked seeing the interaction between Jack and Norrington without it actually becoming slash. One thing did make me twitch though...Norrington's first name is definitely James, not Edward.

Very nice. It's rare that anyone does a character justice in this fandom. Awesome job.

"Sand angel," Jack replied fervently, far too pleased with his efforts.

Loved this. Beautifully, beautifully written.

~Mina~

great fic, the commodore's name is norrington...you may want to go back and change the 'edward' bit...

LOL. Cute. I liked it. Brilliant characterizations!

wonderful, absolutely beautiful. Love these kinds of fics...ye've a wondrous talent for writing, i'll tell ye that right now. keep up the great work!