Reviews for One Day's Head Start
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I really enjoyed this. There was so much humanity in both characters that we were never shown before.
wolfdog127 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
i love it!
snarky Beth chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
This is really good, I enjoyed reading it! Jack and James are two of my fav characters and I love how you wrote their interaction.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I like your portrayal of Jack.
rockstop57 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Excellent. You've got their relationship down, I think. I enjoyed this so much. (Even if you lacked the omniscience to divine Norrington's first
Sedri chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Lovely story. Thanks so much for writing it.
Lord Commodore Norry chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
this is really good, but just for the record, Norrington's name is 'James', not 'Edward'.
Acanthusss chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
I believe I've read this story at least three times over, and I can't believe I haven't reviewed or added it to my favorites list! This last time I had to go through Google to find the story with summary keywords to find it; I'm so glad I did!

I love how personal this story is. The plot is simplistic, but still has so much substance! Both Jack and James are perfectly in character. The whole thing is written wonderfully, including grammatically and stylistically.

Thank you for sharing your writing!
LadyLefaye chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
I thought this story was well written. I liked seeing the interaction between Jack and Norrington without it actually becoming slash. One thing did make me twitch though...Norrington's first name is definitely James, not Edward.
IVIaedhros chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Very nice. It's rare that anyone does a character justice in this fandom. Awesome job.
Shadarus chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
"Sand angel," Jack replied fervently, far too pleased with his efforts.
bequeathed chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Loved this. Beautifully, beautifully written.

Skylines and Turnstiles chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
great fic, the commodore's name is may want to go back and change the 'edward' bit...
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
LOL. Cute. I liked it. Brilliant characterizations!
Captain MeraSparrow chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
wonderful, absolutely beautiful. Love these kinds of've a wondrous talent for writing, i'll tell ye that right now. keep up the great work!
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