|Reviews for Earning my Keep|
| madison camelia chapter 17 . 1/2
Woa, it is really, really awesome. This is one of the best fic I have ever read. Besides, I love the ideas that Vietnam is the place where Tomoyo met Eriol again. I am a fan of th couple
Thank you too much to write such a wonderful story
( cám ơn bạn rất nhiều vì đã viết một câu chuyện tuyệt vời đến vậy )
By the way, ( plum in Vietnamese means " Hoa Mận " and peony is " Mẫu đơn " ) Hope you like it
| madison camelia chapter 7 . 1/2
Hey, I am a Vietnamese. Thank you too much to bring our country in your story. Love you
( cảm ơn bạn đã biết đến đất nước nhỏ bé của tôi, một quốc gia tuy bé nhỏ nhưng xinh đẹp vô cùng )
here, add to your Vietnamese vocabulary
( Tôi yêu bạn : I love you )
( Hoa anh đào : Sakura )
( Lí Tiểu Lang : Li syaoran )
( Xin chào : Hello )
( cảm ơn : thank )
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/17/2014
I'm from India and, believe me when I say, sari is not comfortable. ( ._.)
Handling it just wears you out.
And, excellent story. I loved it! _
| cyamato chapter 17 . 5/26/2013
Hello! I know this is a fairly belated review (seeing as how it's been five years) but I just finished reading your story, and my god did I enjoy it. Right now I'm actually the age you were when you were editing this (unless that was a lie and you're really some middle aged man who's too obsessed with anime/manga.. Then again I could be wrong.. Haha). Anyways, about an hour or so ago I had a whim to look up a fanfiction for Sakura and Syaoran because I'd just finished a book and was longing for something to read, and remembered all the other fanfictions of those two that I had read (after finishing the manga I wanted more of them), and then thought that I might be able to find another good one (I'd only found one really good fanfiction of s/3025578/1/Apartments). In yours there were almost no grammatical errors, and I loved that! My favorite parts were from chapters 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, and the epilogue. The plot line was awesome, if there was more detail in the story (Sakura's voyage, the plundering of villages, Sakura's stay with Meiling, Syaoran's courtship of Sakura, etc.), then this could potentially be a novel! Of course, it has been a while and you might not even read this, but I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed this story, and the twist on the original characters is so refreshing.
| waiting-for-you443 chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
I looked everywhere for this story! I loved it the first time I read it, and would love the honor of re-reading it from time to time. It was exceptionally well-written. This story impressed me greatly. Fantastic job. :)
| PolarBlue chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Great job! very uncliche. nice range of vocab
| pikachu2510 chapter 17 . 1/5/2011
1st I didnt understand wat happened between Sakura, Syaoran and Meiling... it was kinda confusin ;p buh in the end I understood it ;p... buh I still dun get how Sakura had the potential 2 ruin Meilings life o.O... well this story was interestin XP... thx 4 uploadin it D
| Koduka chapter 2 . 5/13/2010
I just read the whole story and that was awesome! I couldn't stop reading until I finished! Great Job! Keep up with the smokin' work!
| romancelvr25 chapter 14 . 12/23/2009
i am confused a bit with tomoyo and eriol. I know that they are engaged and everything but what is with Eriol and Syaoran? I kinda dont understand it with them...can you explain?
| Akemi-kun chapter 12 . 6/27/2009
This chapter was more understandable. Yay!
| Akemi-kun chapter 11 . 6/24/2009
Oh...? They were married?
What happened to Touya?
The story is getting more confusing..
But oddly, it still captivates my attantion.
| Akemi-kun chapter 10 . 6/24/2009
Oh, my! XD
This is so cool!
| Akemi-kun chapter 6 . 6/24/2009
It seems as though the character development was rushed...
Love this chapter though. :D
| Akemi-kun chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
| Akemi-kun chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
M... Oddly frank, but, who cares! It's good right now!