|Reviews for SC SMACKDOWN|
| Trev chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Laughed very much during the reading of this fic. Thanks. Actually, I nearly hyperventilated, and even if that doesn't sound like a very good compliment (lacking in eloquence and all that), you should take pride anyways. ;)
| Sofiana chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
"'BOVA FROM URANUS!'
Silence swept through the audience, seemingly more deafening than the original roars.
Then someone snorted.
Laughter erupted loudly, causing Bova to sigh. 'I hate being from Uranus...'"
And, of course...
"Radu nodded and looked out into the audience.
Then he took off his shirt.
It took them days to identify all the bodies."
| WhyIOughta chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Ok, ok, we all need to laugh now, I understand that. I'm not usually one to give bad reviews, but this is going to be an exception.
I don't know when you wrote this fic, but I suggest you remove this phrase from it as soon as possible:
"...ABLE TO SHOCK A SPUNG WARLORD INTO UNCONSCIOUSNESS, ABLE TO CAUSE A THOUSAND CREATURES TO WANT TO COMMIT SUICIDE WITH A MERE PHRASE"
Now I'm not usually bossy, but I feel as though I have the right to tell you to change this. I strongly disapprove of Bova's description. Please fix it...NOW.
| Leelee chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Classic! Killer ending.
| Princess Amanda chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
I needed a distraction, and boy howdy, you gave me one. This story is hilarious! Thank you, Lokaia.