Ah, about time Jack appeared. I love the bit with the treacle tart and the grapple.

No...how could you stop it there? How COULD you? Cliffhangers make me twitch. Am expecting an excellent next chapter.

i love it! brilliant!
you never cease to amaze the bloody hell out of me! your norrington and gillete are excellently writtenand i am starting to really like elisabeth.
that lady susan is ... disgusting...
and you made jack appear! wooho!
please continue as soon as possible! i need more!
cheerios

I love your fanfic! I have to say, this is honestly the best Gillette/Norrington fic I've ever read. Your writing style is wonderful and the plot is very well paced! I hope you continue!

This is wonderful! I just love your story. I mean they would make such a cute couple! Oh it's just too adorable, the scenes with the lil kittens! *grins* Normaly I only read PotC fics that have to do with Jack/Will pairings but this caught my attention and I'm glad it did. You have a brilliant sense of humor! The story's dialouge and plot are so realistic! I can't wait to find out what will happen next! I'm glad that it's not as one-sided as Andrew (great name btw) and Jonathan believe! This is truly spectacular! Please post the next update soon! I'm addicted to this now! I wanna write one of my own! *grins* *waves*
Later yo,
Icy

How embarrassing... I've had French lessons for years now and still couldn't understand what exactly Gilette said in chapter one... ;

It's a pity that your stories are so sadly overlooked. I really like your writing style. I even start to like not only Norrington, but his friends too And those kitties! *squeals*

Keep going! I want to see that Susan character loose to Gilette! *laughs evilly* This small number of reviews may be discouraging, but you write really well! )

Oh my God. That last sentence but some ver VERY provocative thoughts in my head! *_*

Aw! Thoses kittens! I wanna cuddle them almost as much as I wanna cuddle Gillette! _-

I love the way you write, this fic is one of the best I've come by.

Laters!

PS: I hope Lady Skanky gets slaped by a mad monkey! :)

More please, this is really good

firstly: unbelieveable!

this story rocks my socks. :-)

your a great writer and perfectly balance humor with gillett's and norrnington's sort of angsty thoughts. go you!

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"Sir, forgive me, but I believe your desk is mewling."

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that is just bloody hilarious!

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"Well sir, I'm sure that if you hold it up, Andrew will be more than willing to kiss it all bet-OW!"

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so great! you're definatly my new hero, fanfiction-wise.

cheers to you for keeping the characters in character!

cheerios and please continue asap...

btw. continue men of our word/acts of piracy! PLEASE!

Cute and funny with a just the right amount of angst mixed in. Wonderful story!

I am not a big fan of Gillette (i thought he was bit of a snob from the movie), but your portray of Gillette is awesome. He's so witty and charming. Your Norrington is scarily in character as always, and I am pleasantly surprised by .

Now lady Susan I have a instant dislike for, there is something fishy about her. Either she's up to something, or she's just really desperate. I mean she's an interesting character, but I just can NOT like her. _ Or was that the effect you were going after?

Anyway, great job! Please, please update soon. I want to see more Norrington and Gillette moment, and the kittens. The kittens are the BEST! _

This is nice - light and fluffy and so on, with good characterisation and good writing. Pretty good French, too, but I did notice a few minor grammatical errors (sorry, my degree was in French and so it's the sort of thing that hits me). If you want them correcting, I'd be happy to help - there's a "contact me" on my website which can be found in my bio.

Looking forward to chapter 4.

very, very good.

you write extremely well and had me in fits of laughter during the second chapter. i love how you portray gillette.

do update soon, cheers

this is so cool! please write more!

I loved your story "Men of our Word", and I'm going to love this one, as well - just please, please continue writing! So many neat details about Gillette (the French, the redhead-thing, I was only missing an allusion to razor-blades;-)

Norrington is completely in character, which is pretty rare. The others are pure fun, the officers maybe a little giggly for grown men, but that's just my opinion.

All in all: Three rounds of cheers!

Thanks for posting,

-Yano.

If I weren't so totally inept at reviewing, I'd have commented before... I really enjoyed reading this, great characterisations and dialogue, perfect balance between humorous and emotional, and a lot more plausible and realistic than most PotC slash scenarios.

Just don't lose interest in this before finishing it? Please?