Reviews for History
Tavata chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
This is the first poem that I read about that scene I love it
Nephra Cerrina Velazquez chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I loved it ... i think your format and style is great .. one of the few poems that caught my attention in a long time

Crystal7 chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
That was lovely. I can see Lucian feeling that way. It was a good poem to go with a good scene. (The pain and anger that was in his eyes as he watched them).

Terrific. Hope to see more works from you in the future.
GothicChick01617 chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
This was an excellent way to describe this scene
Margaret chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
Lovely. Good job at keeping things in character.
xXxCrimsonTearsxXx chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Very good. Very short tho. Wish u wouldve written more -_- LOL I LOVE DAT FACE! Anyways...
Xenriel chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Short, but impressive.
nathana chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
wow, this was beautiful. i loved it.
moonchick chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
You are very sneaky. Only just came across this!

Anyway...I loved it. Simple and understated and yet it cuts right to the core of Lucian's motives. And has a healthy dose of angst which I always love. Breathtaking.
Kelly Pendergrass chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Fantastic poem! It's short, sweet, and to the point. You did a great job on getting this message across. Love it!
WickedDesign chapter 1 . 9/27/2003
I haven't watched the "UnderWorld." What you wrote here seem simple but very emotionally charged and convey good angst to pique us to learn more about the subject :D

You're an awesome poet, I know I always love that about ya ;)
IceQueenK8 chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
sniff, sniff beautiful! I love Lucian! He rules!
Jess J chapter 1 . 9/25/2003

Beautiful. Excellent. Wonderfully written and touching. Lucian was my favorite character, and I loved that last part. You captured it perfectly and in few words.

alance07 chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Interesting piece, this is the first Underworld poem I've read and I liked it a lot. Hope you write more soon.

Trying to get Underworld it's own category so if you could ...

(please describe the category, which area it falls under, and whether you have stories written for it)Thanks!