Reviews for Two people one heart
zeo knight chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
cool to sort and slight spelling mistakes but its good
kirallie chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
More? Please! Cool story!
pissed of reviewer chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
who the hell is Danlie, Danile?

if you mean Danny, his full name is Daniel Jackson
Chara13 chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
nice
JacksBoonie chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Not bad, despite the obvious errors. The plot line is very interesting. Keep going with it! I'd love to read more.
saurion chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
GET SOMEONE TO PROOFREAD THIS.
I second that! sheesh it's DANIEL
KaliedescopeCat chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
GET SOMEONE TO PROOFREAD THIS.