|Reviews for Bloodied Up|
| alix33 chapter 13 . 9/8/2009
"I know. I have been introduced to it, I was induced to pat it, I am now gonna have to have this suit drycleaned after it managed to projectile shed more hair than you would possibly believe a single kitten could contain. The thing should be bald by now." - LOL
| BlackRaven chapter 22 . 3/10/2004
Well...I don't really know what to say...
I've been following the whole story very closely from the begining, I've read every single part and DAMN you're good. I think you're an amazing wirter and I love this story - one thing I will ahve to say is that I wish you would develop Sam's character a little more - you did a wonderfull job in the begining and then kind of got swept away with the Bartlet family and left him there...stuck!
Any way - great story and I hope it doesn't take too long to write the next part - and PS congratulations on winning at the JEDS! I actually voted for you in practically every single category you were nominated for...
| Anjali Organna chapter 22 . 10/20/2003
YAY! I loved it!
| BlackEyedGirl chapter 22 . 10/17/2003
And once again we're left in eager anticipation. Just wanted to tell you how much I love your Toby. It's nice to see him channeling that single-minded devotion into a non-work thing. Plus the reasons were very sweet, showing what Toby's really like under the gruffness. Come back soon!
| BenRG chapter 22 . 10/17/2003
Amen, Jed. Anything /is/ possible. You've just got to try hard enough.
Two things to be happy about: (1) Andi is giving Toby another chance and (2) this story isn't over yet. You've created a wonderful AU for TWW, Nomad, and you've got me hooked if no one else. :-)
BenRG's Overall Rating: 7/10
| LoveChilde chapter 22 . 10/16/2003
Aw...*sniff* I'm so happy for them...I mean, finally. Take all the time you need, hon, but come back sometime, yeah?
| Jesper chapter 22 . 10/16/2003
Nomad...dude! Awesome story yet again! I get home from a hellish round of icky disgusting graveyard, I read your story and all is right with the world. :) Great pace to the story as always; fanatic twists and turns that keep the reader wanting more. Loved the '1001 Reasons to Marry Toby Ziegler'. A very Tobyesque thing to do. Can't wait to read some more...thanks again for a fun read! :)
| CW chapter 21 . 10/15/2003
I'm glad you brought Danny into the equation...he is the member of the press that is closest to the administration, and yet still impartial. Good choice
The Toby/Andy thing was absolutely adorable. Such a Toby thing to do, combining logic and emotion to prove his point.
| Lady Abbey Bartlet chapter 20 . 10/14/2003
Nomad, praises and glory to you. Like LoveChilde, I too believe the show has gone down. Your stories are the perfect antidote to my blues. When I first started to read this series, I was uncertain about Sam and Steve. But you have done a wonderful job of convincing me on Sam/Steve.
I adore how you got the President a kitten! It just seems so right for the job of First Pet. If I could, I'd like to make a name suggestion. Call me strange, but I think Misha is a nice name. It's been floating around in my head ever since you introduced the kitten. All the rest of your story is spot on. You characterize everyone in the story just as there are written on the show. You do a wonderful Toby. Any plans on the relationship side? (ex: Josh/Donna)
| BenRG chapter 19 . 10/13/2003
XD That last bit... It is /so/ Toby! What can I say? It was just so funny. I bet Andy didn't know whether to laugh... or go to Communications and try and make him /eat/ the thing! XD
I wonder how things are gonig to work out for Hoynes. It is going to be tough, but if he can make it clear that it was a mistake that he is through with, he might /just/ make it. Too bad for 'the other woman', though. She is going to quite possibly end up as sounding like the 'baddie'.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
| Leyna chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Wonderful stories - thank you for sharing!
| the.nerd.voice chapter 15 . 10/9/2003
Go Nomad, It's your birthday...
Okay, So it really isn't your birthday, but this story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what the First Lady has to say about Jed's illness. I hope it isn't too bad, same with Zoey. Well, anyway, It's your usual extraordinary writing self that I think is the bomb. Keep up the wonderful work!
| LoveChilde chapter 14 . 10/8/2003
Know something? You're just what I need now the actual show seems to be going downhill. Where d'you get all that stuff? Still fantabulous.
| Kim The Manipaltive Little Mo chapter 14 . 10/8/2003
Woow! Man, dude you need to be going and writing for the show, cause you are ten million bloody times better then the crap they are spewing out there!
| BenRG chapter 12 . 10/6/2003
Suggestion to C. J. Cregg: Have the schoolchildren of America name the cat. :-) Suggestion to Joshua Lyman: Give it up, they are a lot more tenacious than you are. :-D
Danny seems close to knowing what is going on. I don't know, maybe he's psychic or something. However, it might not be possible to save Hoynes. Heck, he might not be /saveable/.
This is your usual fine work. Keep it up!
BenRG's Rating: 7/10