|Reviews for Written In The Sky|
| gleamfang chapter 2 . 11/1/2011
I just have to stop here cause I'm laughing so hard! Zell horny fisherman! HAHAHAHA!
Rinoa's mouth is so amazing. What kind of threat is making people a shish kabob to sell to Horny fisherman! It's a good threat but it's just way too funny. The filter comment is another piece of gold too.
It strikes me as a little odd that Seifer just "expected" to pass the SeeD test because Squall's commander. In this fic, Seifer seems to be equipped with a better moral compass and sense of judgement so I won't be surprised if his performance on SeeD tests was more than satisfactory but it's just kind of a weird vibe I get that he expected to pull some weight to pass.
| revolution chapter 14 . 11/19/2009
love you sabam, favourite fanfic ever in the 5 or so years i've been reading them, its very unfortunate that you've decided to quit writing. i believe you have great skill at it and would love to see more, maybe a continuation of ch. 14, what the next 9 months were like or whatever.
| taintedgump chapter 15 . 12/14/2008
woot, awesome, i loved it again. still good, you still gots it. not that it changed after 5 years but its great. you outta put them both back up so more people can read them, seeing as how almost nobody checks back through the old stuff; a few pages, maybe, 30 pages, uh...no.
| forrestlinderman chapter 4 . 12/13/2008
| yellow chapter 4 . 12/3/2007
I love your story, it's really cute... but i don't believe that Sponge Bob is the ugliest thing you've ever seen.. I'd say Yvon of the Yukon is about 12 times uglier.
| ScarredAngelft chapter 2 . 5/5/2006
Well...eh. It's easy to tell that this was written before leather and lace. And it's not bad...I just love the other so much!
| ScarredAngelft chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
lol, excited fo r this chapter are we?
I did love it btw..so cute.
| xXxANIMEfreekXxX1234 chapter 15 . 12/22/2005
i realy like how this story ended with the whole snapshots thing
| JayLiyah chapter 15 . 12/18/2005
Nice ending, I was a little confused on whose viewpoint it was at first. Ah, I'll miss their banter, it was... interesting. Great job, I'll finish your reading your other stories soon.
| JayLiyah chapter 5 . 12/17/2005
Ahh.. the horrors of Kraft dinner! :O This is the only time I could ever think horribly on mac and cheese.
That banter between Squall and Rin in this chapter cracked me up, especially that bit about not having sex and Squall begging? XD
Geez.. father and daughter argument was seriously over the line. I literally cringed at the things they said..
Whoo, this was another good chap.
| JayLiyah chapter 4 . 12/17/2005
Heh, so her dad finally knows the truth. Dang, he was a bit harsh..
I know this actually relates to what happened at the end of the last chap, but I found it sort of odd that Rinoa was mad at Squall, instead of crying and worrying because he got hurt - but then again, she's OOC in this fic, I keep forgetting that.
Damn that Spongebob song! It's annoying but funny.
| LinkOOT chapter 15 . 11/8/2005
That is the best fan fic I have ever read!
Please for gods sake keep up the good work.
Ill be waiting for any more of your stories.
| SavannahX chapter 15 . 9/17/2005
SO they named her Riana did they? I like that name its so pretty. Oh and I didn't quite get the ending, but oh well. I got half of it, but then I've never been able to fully functionally read italics, without confusing everything, so yeah. Nice job!
| Cerulean Crystal chapter 3 . 7/2/2005
kids are annoying.
| Cerulean Crystal chapter 4 . 7/2/2005