this is exactly how I think every time my mom tells me to do something

You dead or just lost interest?

The story layout needs work. As it is, there is no clear indication as to where the AN stops and the chapter startsit's all blended together.

According to the harry potter Wikipedia page, durmstrang is located in the northern region of Norway or Sweden.

Daedalus Diggle wasn't the shady character in the Order of the Phoenix. That was Mundungus Fletcher.

"Jester King is mine". No it's not you narcissistic weirdo.

lol, anyone can use your characters. What an ego on you. You own no characters, they are JK Rowling's in the end, as is the world of Harry Potter. The only person who can say anything about who can use what characters is Rowling. Also, why do you keep falling for trolls? Are you just that naive?

Hello I am genuinly excited to read more of this fanfic

Honestly the story was good but have you ever even read harry potter I mean, diagon alley and knock turn alley are in London. The British minsinstry of magic is also in London. Hogwarts is in Scottland along with hogsmede. Beabuxtons is in France run by the French ministry of magic. Durmstang is in like Bulgaria run by the Bulgarian Ministry of magic. You chopped this all together like it was attached in one location super confusing.

I just noticed that Ch. 31/32 are the exact same.

I honestly forgot Voldemort existed or was even alive before this chapter since Voldie has never really been mentioned in this a lot

You would have throttled the only family that you had left that cared about you instead of the person who instructed everyone to keep you in the dark? That's definitely a hallmark of a critical thinker!

"..lifting his hand to his mask.." King in Yellow time. Yowza!

I have always thought that Ron and Hermione are given too much of the lion's share in
Harry Potter fanfiction stories.

I need an update. Please.