|Reviews for The Pirate and the Thief|
| ProtectoraofmiLuna chapter 6 . 9/24/2011
Gah what the heck? Please u gotta add more please please please please I'm begging ya UPDATE!
| Bekkh chapter 6 . 4/5/2010
The detail of your story is really good and i cant wait for the next update. :P
| Seychelles chapter 4 . 8/17/2005
| shinami chapter 4 . 8/15/2005
I love it! I love it! I just love these kinds of stories.
I like the plotline, the way you set everything up, and
of course, the characters. I'm a big fan of Captain Jack
Sparrow and I like one you've made up too. Keep going on this. Maybe they'll go on a treasure hunt and get
into some trouble*.*
Keep writing! I'll keep reading!.
| Spirit of the Sky chapter 4 . 8/15/2005
I love it so far! Hurry up and update...I'm dying to see what happens next.
Spirit of the Sky
| YourRedRightAnkle chapter 4 . 8/14/2005
Great start to your story :) it has alot of potential. keep it up!
P.S, I don't know if you know this, but you have you're (i dont know what it's called)...thing-y set on signed reviews only. You can change that when you go into your profile...there is a good chance you will get many more reviews if you change it :)
hope that helps... can't wait for more :)
| Jupiter's Light chapter 2 . 12/18/2003
Cool! Post more ASAP! Great story!
| Bulletproof Dork chapter 2 . 9/26/2003
Interesting. While the story could be quite fascinating, it's a tad bit hard to read. I dig the concept of a modern day jewel thief coming face to face with an 18th century pirate.
I highly suggest running this piece through a spell and grammar check (Microsoft Word rocks for such purposes!). Using variations when it comes to sentence structure would help as well.
Best of luck!