Reviews for Myopic
404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
I absolutley love it. This was marvelous, it was different, it was deep, it was outright fabulous. You are so great. Good Job! :D
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
why is this so effing depressing?

but good idea
orangeandwhite chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
beautiful and very sad.

make it longer?

a little less emo? (ex. "no one noticed"-boo hoo!)

why was tom there before, but she cares so much what harry will say.

i thought the part where, in order to mentally escape, she pictures each brother's method of punishment. its especially tragic and beautiful...
magickal1 chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
It was a good piece of writing, but I didn't like it that much. It was a bit confusing. Not bad, though.
SpontaneousDreamer chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
o freakishly dark.

but I like it...
kittybro chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
wow! T.T noone noticed how detached she was T.T
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
it sucked.
lady redis chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Bravo
Aphrodite's Apples chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
So sad, but so very very good! I love it!

darkmoon-on-dragonwings

P.S. I'f you get a chance you might find my latest fic interesting.