Reviews for Sweet Surrender
Mirandaannw chapter 18 . 6/8/2013
This was extremely hard to read. Whole sent aces missing, end of sentences missing and words missing. Having to fill in the blanks yourself makes it difficult to read. You might want go back and fix that. Had good potential of being an excellent story.
DracoMalfoy456 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
What is up with the missing words and phrases? Did you just... Forget to put them in, or what? Because, honestly, it's making me not want to continue reading, even though I like the story. It is incredibly annoying, trying to figure out what words/ phrases are missing.
OliviaR5Warbler chapter 18 . 3/29/2011
awsome story, the bit with riley really had me on the edge of my seat, well done
Angellia chapter 18 . 3/24/2009
Beautiful story, i enjoyed it a lot x
ThePinkSpider chapter 4 . 12/23/2008
Did you realize that there are sentences in your story which are - quite frequently I might add - missing whole pieces? Sometimes just a word, very often though there are several words missing. It is very confusing if one has to imagine what might have been forgotten by you in order to understand the damn sentences.
murderscene chapter 18 . 10/18/2008
aw that was adorable.
laura chapter 18 . 6/1/2008
it was really great im so glad i have actually found a story that is finished and is filled with suspence :)
Jamie chapter 18 . 2/20/2006
Wow. This story was really good. Kudos! You'll hear from me again soon probably, I'm going to check other stories by you. Great job. Bye.
souled-angel chapter 18 . 1/1/2006
Loved this story.
FadeToBlack315 chapter 18 . 3/26/2004
You have such remarkable talent. Don't stop writing. This story was beautiful.
Macotee chapter 18 . 1/18/2004
Loved your story! Once I started reading it i couldn't put it down ((or get off the comp) unless it was absolutly neccessary. Great job!
spike.vs.angel chapter 18 . 1/16/2004
great story, but what about riley...you never explained what happened at the trial. Is there going to be a sequel? I hope so because it was really good. Thanks.
XLZyAng3LX chapter 18 . 1/13/2004
Great Story! I Love it! I never leave the computer till I finish it even though I have to go to sleep 4 school tomorrow! Love ur story gurl!
XLZyAng3LX chapter 16 . 1/13/2004
Great Story! Update Soon!
SpikesBloodyVampiress chapter 18 . 1/13/2004
*sniffle* It was marvelous, simply marvelous! *applauds* Wonderful story!
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