Great job I really enjoyed reading it

This was extremely hard to read. Whole sent aces missing, end of sentences missing and words missing. Having to fill in the blanks yourself makes it difficult to read. You might want go back and fix that. Had good potential of being an excellent story.

What is up with the missing words and phrases? Did you just... Forget to put them in, or what? Because, honestly, it's making me not want to continue reading, even though I like the story. It is incredibly annoying, trying to figure out what words/ phrases are missing.

awsome story, the bit with riley really had me on the edge of my seat, well done

Beautiful story, i enjoyed it a lot x

Did you realize that there are sentences in your story which are - quite frequently I might add - missing whole pieces? Sometimes just a word, very often though there are several words missing. It is very confusing if one has to imagine what might have been forgotten by you in order to understand the damn sentences.

aw that was adorable.

it was really great im so glad i have actually found a story that is finished and is filled with suspence :)

Wow. This story was really good. Kudos! You'll hear from me again soon probably, I'm going to check other stories by you. Great job. Bye.

Loved this story.

You have such remarkable talent. Don't stop writing. This story was beautiful.

Loved your story! Once I started reading it i couldn't put it down ((or get off the comp) unless it was absolutly neccessary. Great job!

great story, but what about riley...you never explained what happened at the trial. Is there going to be a sequel? I hope so because it was really good. Thanks.

Great Story! I Love it! I never leave the computer till I finish it even though I have to go to sleep 4 school tomorrow! Love ur story gurl!

Great Story! Update Soon!