Reviews for Working up an Appetite
Karieflybabe chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Yeah, that was wonderful!
PCGirl too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
I just realized I never commented on how much I loved your story, so I love it. I love all that you've put into your website also. You are amazing Melody.
Nat chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
OMG Melody! This short fanfic is awesome :)

I love "Heaven Sent An Angel" as well. U are a really talented writer!

gracie a chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
sorry - too lazy to sign in properly. :) Great story Melody! I loved it! That's exactly what happens to me - I think to myself - "Wait a second - where's the rest of that scene?" LOL! If only they had asked us to write it. :( Now I gotta go - some people, who shall remain nameless :) want me to post a new chapter in a hurry! Again, great job!
Anonoymous chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Thank you so much for writing a Rali story (so tired of the Caleb/Ali stories-their sexual relationship is sick, IMO).

Thank you for keeping the characters in character and writing Rali true to form. Great job!