|Reviews for Handed on a Silver Platter|
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/16/2015
Excellent fic with a somewhat messed up ending. Ranma gets a really bad concussion because a pirate his him in the head, yet Akane's mallet strikes knock him flying with no great injury? Wtf?
Anyway, strange distraction at the end but excellent nonetheless.
| Ibskib chapter 18 . 1/29/2015
You know, it was pretty obvious that Ranma and Nabiki would end up together, but for the last few chapters I actually expected it to end with a Ranma/Nabiki/Kasumi solution, there's been several hints in that direction, they never seemed to begrudge each others' obvious feelings.
I can at least picture that's how an epilogue would turn out somehow. :-)
| SomebodyLost chapter 18 . 10/26/2014
That was actually a nice, slow going romance that developed all three sisters; Nabiki's tenderness, Kasumi's strength, and Akane's maturity. I'm actually happy that you wrote them all marvelously reasonably, with Akane not being portrayed as a crazy bitch.
Anyhoo, this was refreshing; nothing like slow but true romance to drive away sex-obsessive plots. Not that I'm complaining of the latter, but they're too many nowadays.
Thanks for writing!
| Ryoga's best friend chapter 18 . 10/1/2014
This was a surprising find for me... every so often I go on a quest to look for Ranma 1/2 fanfiction in hopes of coming up with an enjoyable read. Ranma is what got me into fics in the first place after all.
This wasn't perfect but it was probably one of the few romance stories that had a nice subtle build to a decent conclusion. There sa few hiccups and odd moments spread about but the ranma/nabiki romance came across as a natural growth of the story, one that early on could have gone kasumi or akane's way without coming off forced. Good job on the good read :)
| KrisB-71854 chapter 18 . 9/28/2013
One of my favorite Nabiki/Ranma fics. Akane never really works with him. Kasumi can teach and guide him and learn to be adventurous. Nabiki though is just enough of a trouble maker to keep his life as interesting as he needs it.
I liked this because Akane just knew that Ranma clicked better with either of her sisters and the entire that they both had feelings for him didn't really hurt her that badly. I think Akane could easily get into protecting Nabiki as she knows just how trouble some being in his life can be.
This ended on a very good note. I would have loved to see a bit more of these two together and making a go at their business and such.
| shugokage chapter 18 . 4/18/2013
Beautiful story great job!
| irnzenmonk chapter 18 . 1/23/2013
this was a very entertaining story ne
| Gemini011 chapter 18 . 1/17/2013
Knowing that you originally meant this to be a Ranma/Akane fic explains a lot. The gradual shift in relationship focus ended up working really well though.
I have to say, sometimes while I was reading I would get tripped up by the writing style. It sometimes felt like too much telling and not enough showing. But the more I thought about it, the more it worked. You were clear and articulate in your descriptions of what people were feeling and thinking, and the less deft moments (oh, "A Deft Touch" is another great Ranma/Nabiki fic btw, I absolutely recommend it) didn't take too much away from the story.
Anyway, thanks for writing. I really enjoyed this fic, and it's going in my favorites - a rare ocurrence.
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/9/2012
Damn! this was one of the best Ranma/Nabiki stories I've read! While it was a mistake some of the best stories come from mistakes. good work dude.
| Poetheather1 chapter 18 . 4/18/2012
This was a very fun story. I enjoyed it a great deal and thought the characters were true to form and that they naturally moved in to the relationship you had set up. Very well done.
| Dinian chapter 18 . 1/8/2012
Amazing fic, probably the best Ranma-Nabiki match up yet.
| LordsFire chapter 18 . 10/15/2011
This was good writing. That's a precious thing, especially when the characters come across as real.
I'm off to look at what else you've done.
| nekoken chapter 18 . 9/29/2011
Hey great story, loved the Nabiki, Ranma and Kasumi interactions and the way you built the ending was good and I like where you cut things off though the lead up to it could have been a bit better. the whole pirate thing was kind or random and seems like an easy way for you to end the story. still a great story though and hope to see some more great writing from you in the future
| Apedreado chapter 15 . 9/19/2011
The Bonbori is also called the Chui, you can find it easily on wikipedia.. btw this story is pretty good and I'll probably finish reading it today as it has me hooked. thank you for sharing this with us.
| Rose1948 chapter 18 . 7/10/2011
I just finished reading your story. It's very sweet, very humorous, slightly wonky, and completely enjoyable. I like how you treated all the characters, giving them presence without the stereotypical silliness that seems to creep into a lot of Ranma fanfic.
Thanks for sharing.