|Reviews for My First Night with you|
| BeckyMorganJamesPendragon chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
that was more poetry but it was still good
| Darcy chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
I think Draco's OOC, and it isn't that good, but it's still sweet and I love the lyrics.
| Queenbeth2 chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
That was so cute.
| Addicted2UrAllure chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
Ehh... it could be better. You had a great idea and all but I had a hard time figuring out what was a lyric and what was part of the fic. Maybe you should put the lyrics in italics? And you might want to try getting a beta reader; I noticed some minor spelling mistakes.
But besides that it was really cute and sweet.
| Americasweetie chapter 1 . 9/27/2003
Hey i liked that alot! That was cute! Are u gonna wirte anything 2 that? Well it was realyl cute!