|Reviews for Here With Me|
| rose-in-may chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
They're dead? Demo..why do they need to go to the store then?
| Zeto chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Totally not what I expectd but a very pleasing end nonetheless.
| takuya chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
wow that was weird but i really liked it lots
| 880503 chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
That was a NICE ending. I was like O_O!
You could work on slipping in some more powerful hints to the whole "dead" thing, and make the end clearer, more dramatic-but the way it is now is actually quite good...I hope you don't mind if I take this concept and turn it into a real short story...I won't plagiarize you...but I was so inspired by this that I really need to write something down, a little different, but a little similar. I hope you continue to write lots of other awesome one-shots!
Lots of Love,
| Jamalyn chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
Wrong. Just plain wrong. But then, that's how I like it, so Yipee! ;) It reminded me of the first scary book I read as a kid where the main characters didn't realize they were actually dead until the very end. The idea freaked me out then and it is still doing so today.
Congrats for being one of the few people capable of makeing me go, "No, uh."
Thanks, also, in advance for any nightmares I may have tonight. No. Really. Thanks. :p
| SavagePhantasie chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
| Sugahlei chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
hmm...this is very good..._ i love the pov and the way your story flows. it's very good. and very good ending!
you have me stumped as to if Ken's dead, or Both of them are dead..._ love it!