That chapter was devastatingly good! This is one of the best Kei/Mot couplings I've ever read!

MORE! and make keitaro and motoko TOGETHER!

Damn that Naru! poor motoko. DAMN Naru hell. anyways thanx for the update, even do you just put me in a slightly bad mood I still appreciated _. Good story, loving every part of it, even the drama, slight anguish, comedy, and all. Love it, keep it up and all keep up the reviews. 8-)

Ps. DAMN NARU TO HELL! not that I have anything against her or anything, I just wish she woould die a blood painfull death Muahahahahahahha. Sorry just got a little carried away, I am sure naru will rediem herself in the end, THEN die a bloody painful death. Just kidding, I would never wish death on anyone, even if they are animated, or would I?. Anywho, Great story keep it up. Update as soon as you can and thanx for the hint. 8-)

I found this to be a particularly interesting story. It was quite a way to end it... definatly not what I was expecting but you ended better than I expected anyway. I enjoyed this story very much I can't tell you which was my favorite part because I enjoyed it emmensely. I definately think you should perhaps make another chapter or perhaps a new stroy altogether I'm sure it will be just as excellent as this one was. Keep up the good work.

whe long story per say been following it gfor a bit but i usually dont reach a revew point till certain parts of a story this happening to be one of them. im amazed at what you seem to be able to do with short chapters. been reading these fics for a while and usually when people write short chapters it tends to well...suck. but youve seemed to manage to pull off a set of very good chapters on limited mount of chapter sizes i must say im quite amazed congradulations on this work so far and i hope you continue to put out good chapters like this for a while. they are all very entertaining.

*grins* Naru VS. Motoko. FIGHT!

ikari shinji

ROFL! I love that Russian thing, it's just so random that it makes you laugh, because it came out of nowhere.

One more hint please. Okay, just answer me this, is this new character, male or female. If male, is it a possible love interest? But I hope you keep Motoko and Keitaro together, I just love the way their relationship is adcancing, it doesn't seem rush, it seems more natural, the way it is developing and advancing. They understand eachother, no each others weaknesses, strenghts, and their passions. All of which are important aspects of any good relationship, but don't take my word for it.

Anywho, Great chapter, hope you update soon. Love the story by the way.

Hrm, now that Keitaro & Motoko have gone as far as they can, wonder what Naru's gonna do to Keitaro when she finally gets her hands on him? LOL

*sniff* good job my friend, keep it up, my next work is on its way _

hey that is great to hear that you are going to be updating every week and all! congrats on this wonderful chapter you have provided us to read and all and thank you for the enteranment of this chapter too!

i cant wait for you next master peice and all so as i say keep writing and keep updating asap so we your fans can read you wonderful story.

"There is no shortcut, to a place worth going"

~KM~

Great work on the chapter MA. I really liked the biking bit. It was pretty amusing and so was the food eating scene. And the bit of fluff was cute at the end! haha see ya later naru! :P

Love the story. One of the great Motoko/Keitaro moments/fics. Love the drama, romance, and action, as well as the tour, never seen it done before on a fic. I liked the whole chase thing were Naru is just one step behind K&M trying to ruin their nice tour. I hope Naru finds keitaro and Motoko when they kiss for the first time, that would be a nice confrontation. And How could she just run away because he decided that he wasn't going to try for todai anymore..tsk, tsk, naru. She isn't as understanding as Motoko in this fic.

PS. Update soon please, I just love this story and can't wait for more. thanx.

oowe, rats(snaps fingers) and I was just thinking of some thing sick too. shruggs. Anyways, I loved this chapter and thought it was cute, erm(clears throat, and in a manly voice)I mean It was alright and funny the way motoko and keitaro acted towards eachother. I like this more carefree keitaro a lot. I seems like a great burden has been lifted off his shoulders with his new , I really like the interaction between the two in this chapter, it brought a smile to my face, just to watch them have fun chasing eachother around joking and hitting eachother playfully, more like Motoko hitting keitaro playfully. Uptade soon please and keep up the good work.

Alright, I admit that you got me a little intrigued about the "Big thing" that's going to happen, but I can take a couple of guesses at what it is. But I really don't know and I really want to know. Now TELL me what this BIG THING is and I will spare you my wrath, or at least drop a hint, or you could just update the next two chapters together and stop gathering suspense, but I have a feeling you aren't are you? of course your not(sighs defeated) Well great chapter anyways, I am enjoying the story and hoping you will update soon.