that was good finally keitaro will choose

nice chapter man kietaro got to choose already

you should of keeped the akward stuff in. it makes it funnyer

I don't mean tat this is wrong but, how would a 7 year old girl pay rent?

And now we have the fecal mater hitting the rotary air impeller device. Naru hits like an A-bomb. Good write on this chappie. you seem to have rebalanced and your story is starting to move forward again.

Ok... Not a bad sceen write. This chappie does not have the omph of your previous chappies. Something seems lost here. I can't seem to figure what that something is though. I sense an imballance, but I can not seem to see where. Good job though.

Like it... I see that you are filling the powder keg. and I guess Naru is gonna be the match? Interesting way this plot bunny is hopping. Good job so far.

Short and to the point...hm... I sense the calm before the feces hitting the rotary air impeller device. Good job this chappie, and I still like this.

(ACK! Too many questions from too many directions) I got a good chuckle from this chappie. You have used comedy well. Laughter in the right spots in a story. Is what is used to lighten, or transition emotions for various parts within a plotline. You are pulling it off well. I still like this. good read so far. (I say good job mostly, but when I say good read. That is very high praise comming from me)

This is good so far... I like this...Is the rest of it as good? Lets find out...

Great symbolism in this chapter.

this is the best story i have ever read. thank you.

Its defijately longer...im inferring that Yakusoku means promise...Motoko loves Keitaro for a logn time but for some unknown reason she hits him...nice...

So Keitaro is perverted in this fic?

How did he get back to Japan by hitting the CN Tower?